The Pain

The pain
Inside me
Became a
knife
That cut deep into
My
     HEART.

Copyright 2011 JohnnyPaul Davis
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 18, 2012 at 3:16 AM
Congratulations on your win :)
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January 17, 2012 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week JohnnyPaul. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday
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January 16, 2012 at 4:07 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week.
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January 16, 2012 at 11:22 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on the week`s winner J.P. !!!:) _ OXOX sending you love
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December 4, 2011 at 5:38 AM
Wonderfully penned. Read it and felt it. Thanks, bl
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