Notes About The Poem

The Overripe Year

Leaves
fallen
in lovely
fading colors
Light snow is flying
the year fast receding
now that harvest days are gone
Baby bluebirds have grown and flown
It's the beautiful, natural way


Written on 11/7/2022
For: A November Nonet Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ashley Avatar
November 26, 2022 at 10:18 AM
Indeed, Evelyn, "it's the beautiful, natural way" of time and life. I adore the natural flow and beautiful, yet subtly sad, imagery ("Baby bluebirds have grown and flown") of your lovely Nonet. But the last line is exquisite in it's acceptance of Nature's way and continuation. Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Buehler Avatar
November 26, 2022 at 11:21 AM
Your delightful comments are deeply appreciated, dear Susan. It is a joy to know that the poem's meaning was successfully conveyed. I wish all the best of the season to you and yours. Hugs, Evelyn
Anaya Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your placement! Never have I thought of birds growing and taking flight, this opens up many images in my mind. I enjoy these things while walking. Thank you, Evelyn,
Buehler Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 12:37 PM
You are most welcome, Anaya. Thank you for your uplifting words.
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 4:04 PM
I liked the adorable imagery of the baby birds, and the last line really summed up your poem well. congrats in my contest, Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 4:48 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words of congratulations, Andrea. I am to have placed. Thank you for sponsoring this enjoyable contest. Evelyn
Wolf Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 8:51 PM
'fading colors' 'light snow is flying' ... 'baby bluebirds have grown and flown' You have captured the spirit of the season well, EJB. Sweet write, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 10:29 PM
Thank you very much for your expressions of appreciation, Gershon. Best of wishes, Evelyn
Horsman Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 9:39 PM
And lets hope, 'It's the beautiful, natural way' keeps keeping on, Evelyn, lovely poetry, that will also last forever...Harry
Buehler Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 10:18 AM
Thank you for your wonderful, inspiring remarks, Harry. Blessings, Evelyn
Poet Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 6:32 AM
Exquisitely penned Nonet, Evelyn. It's as beautiful as nature is. Good luck with the contest
Buehler Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 8:14 AM
Thanks for your kind words, my friend. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 11:32 PM
Your knowledge of nature is great.
Buehler Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Thank you for saying so. :)
Hankins Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 7:14 PM
Indeed, it is, Evelyn. So beautifully-stated, thanks to you.
Buehler Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 9:20 PM
Your appreciation is a joy. Thank you, Milton.
Salehi Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 6:23 PM
Your words are far better than any picture.
Buehler Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 9:19 PM
Thank you for the wonderful compliment, Pashang.
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