Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Clerihew

The Ousting of Adam and Eve

Life was a blast in the Garden of Eden for Adam and Eve,

   'Til the wrath of their Creator invited them to leave!

      They were having a ball traipsing about in their birthday suit,

         'Til that sneaky snake offered them a chomp of forbidden fruit!

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Carolyn Devonshire October 29, 2018 at 1:34 PM Oooh, if only Eve hadn't convinced Adam to take that first bite! Just think of the world we'd have today. Snakes are hiding in all the hedges... Awesome clerihew, my friend. Hope you are doing well. I think of you often. Love, Carolyn Robert L. Hinshaw October 29, 2018 at 2:02 PM Carolyn, thanks for taking a look at this silly clerihew. Always great to hear from you and all goes well here. Hope you escaped the recent hurricane that swept thro Florida - Bob

Charles Messina October 29, 2018 at 6:58 AM Wonderful poetry Bob, very well written as always. I hope all is well with you my dear friend...Charlie

Lindsay Laurie October 28, 2018 at 7:16 PM G'day Bob ... and do know what - we've been eating apples ever since - catch you later Bob - Lindsay

Harry Horsman October 27, 2018 at 5:07 PM I agree with Jan, so clever the poetry, Robert.

Jan Allison October 26, 2018 at 7:18 PM oh such a clever clerihew Bob!:-) hugs jan xx