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The Ousting of Adam and Eve

Life was a blast in the Garden of Eden for Adam and Eve, 'Til the wrath of their Creator invited them to leave! They were having a ball traipsing about in their birthday suit, 'Til that sneaky snake offered them a chomp of forbidden fruit!

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Date: 10/29/2018 1:34:00 PM
Oooh, if only Eve hadn't convinced Adam to take that first bite! Just think of the world we'd have today. Snakes are hiding in all the hedges... Awesome clerihew, my friend. Hope you are doing well. I think of you often. Love, Carolyn
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 10/29/2018 2:02:00 PM
Carolyn, thanks for taking a look at this silly clerihew. Always great to hear from you and all goes well here. Hope you escaped the recent hurricane that swept thro Florida - Bob
Date: 10/29/2018 6:58:00 AM
Wonderful poetry Bob, very well written as always. I hope all is well with you my dear friend...Charlie
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Date: 10/28/2018 7:16:00 PM
G'day Bob ... and do know what - we've been eating apples ever since - catch you later Bob - Lindsay
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Date: 10/27/2018 5:07:00 PM
I agree with Jan, so clever the poetry, Robert.
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Date: 10/26/2018 7:18:00 PM
oh such a clever clerihew Bob!:-) hugs jan xx
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