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The Other Woman

we invited her into our home
she settled in and stayed
that’s simply how the two of us
a threesome we became

it was him me and that other woman
still never a dispute or cross word
the plan was to be the three of us for good
but one day suddenly gone he was
never to return he left us to our own devices
me with the other woman all alone

she shared our daily life
privy to intimate deep secrets
she got so close I’m not surprised she mopes
and I catch her on occasion shed a tear

it sure is different now without him
she keeps her distance and I keep mine
she’s off real quiet in her own world
and that’s just fine with me
but I know she misses him as much as I

at times to keep the peace
and break the silence
as loud as loud can be
I’ll call out clear across the room
‘Alexa, good morning…’ and 
politely all's forgotten
she tells me to have a great day



AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 12:20 PM
Delightful Line! Sometimes our Alexa joins into conversations quite uninvited! Well written with a great a-ha at the end. Congratulations. Blessings and a hug.
Gauthier Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 7:23 PM
Thanks, Sam. Much appreciated ~
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 10:10 AM
Very good communication. Congratulations!
Gauthier Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 5:40 PM
Thank you very much ~
Seeker Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 9:55 AM
Hahaha! Good one!
Gauthier Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 5:40 PM
Thank you ~
Gilmour Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 3:06 PM
Wow Line, this really had me going with such brilliant storytelling ~ I loved it! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 6:23 AM
Thank you so much, Ann ~ so kind
Romios Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 2:55 AM
Quite fascinating, Panagiots
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Thanks, Panagiota.
Gentile Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 12:00 PM
OMG, loved this one Line, really had me going as I'm sure was your expertly crafted intent! Hope you've been well xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 3:32 PM
Thanks, Mike. I really didn't think I'll fool anybody ~ lol
Krutsinger Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 9:20 PM
We have Alexa and Amazon in almost every room in our house, I think a total of six of them. They are so much fun - telling jokes, giving us current news briefings. I forget they are not human, so much fun to have! Bravo! Line, you got me on this one. I had no idea thinking "cat?" the whole time.
Gauthier Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 9:36 PM
Gotcha ~ lol
Edmonds  Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Got me going too Line, wondering what is it all about, then that last verse, what a hoot... Belle
Gauthier Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 7:57 PM
Thank you so much, Belle ~
Y. Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 2:31 PM
Hi Line, I'm with Jan, you had me going all the way until the twist at the end. I can’t get used to Alexa’s voice lol! Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Gauthier Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 7:57 PM
That is too funny ~ thanks, Alexis
Allison Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 1:56 PM
you had me going with this one Line, I love the twist at the end i was getting worried lol, my son has an Alexa i find it rather irritating !:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 2:01 PM
I really didn't think I'd fool anyone, Jan. You're probably just being polite ~lol
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