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we invited her into our home she settled in and stayed that’s simply how the two of us a threesome we became it was him me and that other woman still never a dispute or cross word the plan was to be the three of us for good but one day suddenly gone he was never to return he left us to our own devices me with the other woman all alone she shared our daily life privy to intimate deep secrets she got so close I’m not surprised she mopes and I catch her on occasion shed a tear it sure is different now without him she keeps her distance and I keep mine she’s off real quiet in her own world and that’s just fine with me but I know she misses him as much as I at times to keep the peace and break the silence as loud as loud can be I’ll call out clear across the room ‘Alexa, good morning…’ and politely all's forgotten she tells me to have a great day AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on June 20, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (JUN 22) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on February 8, 2021

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Date: 6/23/2021 12:20:00 PM
Delightful Line! Sometimes our Alexa joins into conversations quite uninvited! Well written with a great a-ha at the end. Congratulations. Blessings and a hug.
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Date: 6/23/2021 7:23:00 PM
Thanks, Sam. Much appreciated ~
Date: 6/22/2021 10:10:00 AM
Very good communication. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/22/2021 5:40:00 PM
Thank you very much ~
Date: 6/22/2021 9:55:00 AM
Hahaha! Good one!
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Date: 6/22/2021 5:40:00 PM
Thank you ~
Date: 2/11/2021 3:06:00 PM
Wow Line, this really had me going with such brilliant storytelling ~ I loved it! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 2/12/2021 6:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ann ~ so kind
Date: 2/10/2021 2:55:00 AM
Quite fascinating, Panagiots
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Date: 2/10/2021 7:12:00 AM
Thanks, Panagiota.
Date: 2/9/2021 12:00:00 PM
OMG, loved this one Line, really had me going as I'm sure was your expertly crafted intent! Hope you've been well xxoo
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Date: 2/9/2021 3:32:00 PM
Thanks, Mike. I really didn't think I'll fool anybody ~ lol
Date: 2/8/2021 9:20:00 PM
We have Alexa and Amazon in almost every room in our house, I think a total of six of them. They are so much fun - telling jokes, giving us current news briefings. I forget they are not human, so much fun to have! Bravo! Line, you got me on this one. I had no idea thinking "cat?" the whole time.
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Date: 2/8/2021 9:36:00 PM
Gotcha ~ lol
Date: 2/8/2021 3:35:00 PM
Got me going too Line, wondering what is it all about, then that last verse, what a hoot... Belle
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Date: 2/8/2021 7:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Belle ~
Date: 2/8/2021 2:31:00 PM
Hi Line, I'm with Jan, you had me going all the way until the twist at the end. I can’t get used to Alexa’s voice lol! Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/8/2021 7:57:00 PM
That is too funny ~ thanks, Alexis
Date: 2/8/2021 1:56:00 PM
you had me going with this one Line, I love the twist at the end i was getting worried lol, my son has an Alexa i find it rather irritating !:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/8/2021 2:01:00 PM
I really didn't think I'd fool anyone, Jan. You're probably just being polite ~lol

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