The other side of the coin

Most counsellors will tell you,
That its is all about you,
And how it is up to you,
To do everything for you,
To treat you,
And find ways to move forward to a better space,
   for the sake of you.

70 years life experience among others,
Who think of others,
Do things because of others,
Do things for others,
Do things with others,
Value others,
Value their mothers,
Or Fathers, 
Or even children from others,
Because they have been mentored by others,
Because they see pleasing some others,
Who see you as one of the others,
Who see the real you, in need of others
Or have saved you from one or more not nice others,
As a way to bring out the best version of you.

A you who has always pleased themselves,
Will never see themselves,
As needing others,
Until they find a version of themselves,
Talking to a counsellor about themselves,
Because they have been left behind by others.

A super confident you,
Sees others in the same boat as you,
Others who have been shown both sides of the coin,
To know how best to join in,
Given the you, that was born in,
To a world that is confusing day out and day in.

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Date: 12/22/2024 4:47:00 PM
David, you have a very interesting take on give and take. If we raise our children well, they will see that giving actually is better than receiving. It's all rather remarkable how being kind and empathetic leads to the greatest inner happiness possible. Most people thing money = happiness, but it is terribly short of the mark. Smiles!
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Date: 12/22/2024 11:09:00 PM
Another smiles. Again your comments resonate Duke. Thanks David
Date: 12/14/2024 10:44:00 AM
There are many versions of us, I think it's how reinventing oneself came into existence. We are either the giver or the taker, self-love much needed for the giver. Still I give credit to those who have lived and experienced. I enjoy your humor, David. You can self-publish its the latest! If you are up for a project, its free, amazon does it, just follow the instructions. I did it! xhugs ~Anaya
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Date: 12/14/2024 1:34:00 PM
Thank you Anaya. Will look into it. And thanks for your kind comments. Regards David in NZ Reply
Date: 12/13/2024 1:25:00 AM
- Life becomes what we make it... it sounds like a cliché, and maybe it is... Talking to someone can help you sort your thoughts and turn things around, David - A very relevant poem for the world we live in - Merry Christmas :) - hugs
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Date: 12/13/2024 5:37:00 PM
Exactly. We need more mentors. I have been giving away copies of this years Christmas poem to people every time I go out. I am happy with the poem. And a very merry Christmas to you to Anne-Lise.
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