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The Other Side of Peak

When bread goes stale and soda flat
And milk begins congealing
Or mold appears on hunks of cheese,
It’s really not appealing.

We know that chirping smoke detectors’
Batteries have died
And lightbulbs’ lives are over
When a rattle’s heard inside.

It’s obvious when objects
Are no longer at their best.
A glance, a sniff, a noise or lack
Confirms what we have guessed.

But how to tell when humans
Reach the other side of peak?
They’ve bypassed retro and can now
Be classified antique!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/29/2015 8:28:00 AM
More of us than desire it, have definitely reached the other side of Peak. But where we are sitting is not too bad, considering how we've weathered the storms. I certainly would not want to start over.
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Date: 3/14/2015 11:13:00 PM
Well when you write like this, I hope haven't even begun to peak.
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Date: 3/14/2015 8:07:00 AM
Great humour Ilene this did make me smile:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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