The Other Half

I search the skies for a signal, a sign, of hope, of trust, of promise amongst the celestial beauty. Is it in the setting sun that warms like the giving of your heart? Is it in the glistening stars that sparkle like the twinkle in your eyes ? Is it in the comets that streak across the sky like that smile streaking across your face? Oh it must be the half-moon such beauty and grace glowing for all to see. For you are the other half The one that completes me.

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Date: 12/9/2014 8:10:00 PM
You are such a romantic. I hope the lady appreciates you. Enjoy the romance as it is such a lovely thing to have. More people should be as romantic as you are. Hugs Edith
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Date: 12/9/2014 11:59:00 AM
Wow! It's lovely.
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Date: 11/28/2014 4:05:00 PM
Beautifully written, as always!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/28/2014 4:16:00 PM
Thank you my friend.... Cheers
Date: 11/27/2014 5:09:00 PM
Dear Tim: Lovely read. Lovely write. Simply lovely! All the best then, my friend. Leon
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Date: 11/27/2014 6:08:00 PM
Thank you Leon my friend.
Date: 11/27/2014 10:15:00 AM
She is your "twin soul" dear, Tim! So beautiful and tender that only you can so clearly see. Very romantic and captivating! Nice avatar!
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Date: 11/27/2014 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios my great friend.. Cheers
Date: 11/27/2014 10:01:00 AM
Well that's complete in itself Tim! Perfectly beautiful my dear friend deserves beyond seven!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/27/2014 11:24:00 AM
Thank you Upma my dear friend...hugs Tim
Date: 11/27/2014 9:40:00 AM
deeply affectionate as the images flow till they reach a final resolve---" the one that completes me.." right on, tim!... huggs
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Date: 11/27/2014 9:51:00 AM
Thank you nette ....huggs
Date: 11/27/2014 9:22:00 AM
This is beautiful and romantic, Tim. The slow build-up reaches its peak with a most lovely final stanza...two halves that constitute a whole. #7 // paul
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Date: 11/27/2014 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Paul my friend....cheers Tim
Date: 11/27/2014 8:13:00 AM
This brought to mind the movie Jerry McGuire, also Austin Powers *lol*. I enjoyed the romance and then my quirky mind took me on a detour.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/27/2014 8:45:00 AM
haha...Thanks Richard
Date: 11/27/2014 4:53:00 AM
Very beautiful romantic poem Tim! Enjoyed! A 7 For you! :) have a great day! Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 11/27/2014 7:30:00 AM
Thanks Dorian...have a Happy Thanksgiving...hugs Tim
Date: 11/27/2014 2:27:00 AM
Rereading this beauty cause..She must be one side of the moon and you the other half!WOW!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/27/2014 4:52:00 AM
You are right :)
Date: 11/26/2014 9:41:00 PM
Another signature piece -- my wife wishes I could write like you!! You got style!!
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Date: 11/27/2014 4:51:00 AM
Thank you my good friend...I love what you do with all your poetry...Happy Thanksgiving
Date: 11/26/2014 8:43:00 PM
Hey Friend! You've penned another beauty.
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Date: 11/26/2014 8:47:00 PM
Thank you Eileen... Love the new avatar... Hugs Tim
Date: 11/26/2014 7:50:00 PM
Your using some neat poetic techniques to make this piece fly. Great poetry.
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Date: 11/26/2014 7:53:00 PM
Thank you Maurice my friend... Cheers
Date: 11/26/2014 6:51:00 PM
How beautiful.this is..Like a dream..Or is it?To my favs: : )
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Date: 11/26/2014 6:54:00 PM
Thank you sweet Charma.... Hugs Tim :-)
Date: 11/26/2014 6:36:00 PM
beautifully penned Tim:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 11/26/2014 6:45:00 PM
Thanks Jan...hugs Tim
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