The Other Half

I search the skies for a signal, a sign, of hope, of trust, of promise amongst the celestial beauty. Is it in the setting sun that warms like the giving of your heart? Is it in the glistening stars that sparkle like the twinkle in your eyes ? Is it in the comets that streak across the sky like that smile streaking across your face? Oh it must be the half-moon such beauty and grace glowing for all to see. For you are the other half The one that completes me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bear Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 8:10 PM
You are such a romantic. I hope the lady appreciates you. Enjoy the romance as it is such a lovely thing to have. More people should be as romantic as you are. Hugs Edith
Ray Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 11:59 AM
Wow! It's lovely.
Vaso Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 4:05 PM
Beautifully written, as always!
Smith Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 4:16 PM
Thank you my friend.... Cheers
Enriquez Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 5:09 PM
Dear Tim: Lovely read. Lovely write. Simply lovely! All the best then, my friend. Leon
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 6:08 PM
Thank you Leon my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 10:15 AM
She is your "twin soul" dear, Tim! So beautiful and tender that only you can so clearly see. Very romantic and captivating! Nice avatar!
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 11:25 AM
Thank you Demetrios my great friend.. Cheers
A. Sharma Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 10:01 AM
Well that's complete in itself Tim! Perfectly beautiful my dear friend deserves beyond seven!
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 11:24 AM
Thank you Upma my dear friend...hugs Tim
Onclaud Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 9:40 AM
deeply affectionate as the images flow till they reach a final resolve---" the one that completes me.." right on, tim!... huggs
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Thank you nette ....huggs
Callus Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 9:22 AM
This is beautiful and romantic, Tim. The slow build-up reaches its peak with a most lovely final stanza...two halves that constitute a whole. #7 // paul
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Thank you Paul my friend....cheers Tim
Lamoureux Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 8:13 AM
This brought to mind the movie Jerry McGuire, also Austin Powers *lol*. I enjoyed the romance and then my quirky mind took me on a detour.
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 8:45 AM
haha...Thanks Richard
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 4:53 AM
Very beautiful romantic poem Tim! Enjoyed! A 7 For you! :) have a great day! Love and hugs! xxx D.
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 7:30 AM
Thanks Dorian...have a Happy Thanksgiving...hugs Tim
Chircop Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 2:27 AM
Rereading this beauty cause..She must be one side of the moon and you the other half!WOW!
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 4:52 AM
You are right :)
Meade Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 9:41 PM
Another signature piece -- my wife wishes I could write like you!! You got style!!
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 4:51 AM
Thank you my good friend...I love what you do with all your poetry...Happy Thanksgiving
Manassian Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 8:43 PM
Hey Friend! You've penned another beauty.
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 8:47 PM
Thank you Eileen... Love the new avatar... Hugs Tim
Yvonne Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 7:50 PM
Your using some neat poetic techniques to make this piece fly. Great poetry.
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 7:53 PM
Thank you Maurice my friend... Cheers
Chircop Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 6:51 PM
How beautiful.this is..Like a dream..Or is it?To my favs: : )
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 6:54 PM
Thank you sweet Charma.... Hugs Tim :-)
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 6:36 PM
beautifully penned Tim:-) hugs jan x
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 6:45 PM
Thanks Jan...hugs Tim
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