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Haven't posted in a couple months.  Thought I'd give it a go.  Actually an ekphrasis, but photo unavailable.

The Orpheus Kiss

I float 
in breathless transience
of heartbeats
as the moon's feral pupil peers
through keyholes
in the clouds

The Orpheus kiss
is a crap shoot
elevens showering sterling whispers
of soft Tiffany roses
from gentle arbors
or twelves
of black sky thundering
bastard answers
to unspoken prayers

I may toss
in subconscious unrest
but deep in pulsing ether
the pristine artery 
to salvation sweetly beseeches
like an incandescent porthole
the siren lure of morning
from lips of nightmare

7/21/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Barden Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 5:14 AM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in John's Free Verse contest, Dale - he knows his stuff! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :o)
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December 13, 2019 at 8:32 AM
Thanks very much, Greg. Best wishes to you for a happy holidays.
Na Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 7:40 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Dale
Cozart Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 8:10 PM
Thanks, Gregory.
Hamilton Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 10:48 AM
This is an impressive write all around Dale, glad you're back posting, you were missed, congrats on a fine win!
Cozart Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 10:52 AM
Thanks very much, John.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 11:20 AM
Your exquisite poetry deserves to be read. I am enchanted with this gorgeous piece Dale. It is so wonderful to have you back posting again my friend. I loved this poem that displays Luna at her mysterious best. xxoo : )
Cozart Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 12:28 PM
Thank you very much, Connie!
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July 24, 2019 at 8:48 AM
- Beautifully described ... a wonderful poem, Dale :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cozart Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 9:05 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.
Ashley Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 6:10 PM
Dale, I am sooo glad you decided to give it a go. I was swept up in your exquisite imagery where every poetic line is a scintillating gem. I especially loved your last three lines for a magnificent finale. Glad to see you posting again. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 6:44 PM
Thank you so much, Susan.
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