The Orphans

Weeds grow around, under the fence that leans
Wagon sits in barn yard needing mending
Hay rake left in the field to use between
Summer showers, rake hay for winter feeding

Wagon sits in barn yard needing mending
Since father died none takes charge of farm
Summer showers, rake hay for winter feeding
Five children left orphaned no one sends alarm

Since father died none takes charge of farm
Hay rake left in the field to use between
Five children left orphaned no one sends alarm
Weeds grow around, under the fence that leans



(My mother's mother was left a widow with five children ages 12 years to 6 months.  Mother's 
father 
was bitten by a rabid dog.  The doctor sent for medicine to treat the illness and gave him the 
meds.  The doctor told him that he needed to rest stay out of the heat but he felt that he had 
to 
move the saw mill to another location so that they could start work and this was a fatal 
mistake.)
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Palli Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 5:19 AM
So sorry about all the hardship
Fraser Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 7:28 AM
Sad story Sara, it makes you wonder how she coped >> James
Culverhouse Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 2:05 PM
good info, thanks, hope you have a good day. Pray for caleb's surgery tomorrow.
Summers Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 1:19 PM
Really great story in its feel you have great skill and it shows in this work
Babcock Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 7:11 PM
A great write Sara. Such a sad story about your relatives. God Bless Phyl
Beam Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 6:43 PM
really moves the heart and mind great write thanks for the Great doctor who heals forever
Esquire Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 6:08 PM
Dear Sara, Ingenius ,Extraordinary Write This is so Awesome I can't find the words to describe how this has touched me Superb I wrote a Senryu Dedication for YOU " Sara " ALWAYS YOURS...HG
Haick Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 5:52 PM
Wonderful Vignette filled with memories of your loved ones. A sad but well-written poem. THank you for your always kind comments, Sara. Peace, Audrey
Chachere Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 3:11 PM
I think I've learned something today through your writing.. And i appreciate your comments too, i will write more. such a moving poem. -Always Lynette
Chircop Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 2:37 PM
Touched mt heart,dear friend,touched me indeed..Charma
Strand Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 8:16 AM
Lovely personal vignette Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 7:37 AM
Gifted writing today Sara and this form is so unique.. the story is so sad but u relate it so well with your flowing verses... thankxxx for sharing.. luv.. Linda-Marie
Cheeseman Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 4:21 AM
Heartfelt piece Sara , very touching Daniel
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