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The Ornament

hang you ornament from your tree but don't you shine until you hear from your maker fall then remain fallen it is my turn I am Alma

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Date: 1/29/2019 7:15:00 PM

Much said in few lines, very moving!

Ricky Muse
Date: 2/3/2019 8:46:00 AM

Michelle I pared this poem to the bone. Thanks!

Date: 1/5/2019 10:23:00 AM

Beautiful and concise.... Loving this poem well crafted. Happy 2019

Ricky Muse
Date: 2/3/2019 8:40:00 AM

Funom this poem was a struggle both literally and figuratively. Thanks for stopping by.

Date: 12/30/2018 2:32:00 PM

Hello Richard Evans, a beautiful free verse poem. Nice to the point. Have a nice day my friend.

Ricky Muse
Date: 2/3/2019 8:38:00 AM

Darlene I thought my free verse period would've ended by now but I guess not. Thanks for your input.

Date: 12/24/2018 10:04:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your deep free verse, Richard. Merry Christmas . Eve

Ricky Muse
Date: 2/3/2019 8:37:00 AM

Thanks Eve. Better late than never right.