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The Ordinary Heart

The Invisible unpicked the stitches holding the broken pieces together like loud music Love spilled like poetry from the ordinary heart Candide Diderot. ‘24

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Date: 3/5/2024 12:13:00 AM
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Candide Diderot
Date: 3/5/2024 12:13:00 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T3a7Vs1Zs0w
Date: 3/4/2024 6:35:00 PM
Dear Candide, this is stunning! The imagery of the "Invisible" unpicking stitches and love overflowing like "poetry" is so evocative. It speaks to the hidden strength within ordinary people, the unexpected places where love blooms. Is this a personal experience you poured into the poem? The vulnerability and beauty of it truly well done. - Blessings, Daniel
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Candide Diderot
Date: 3/5/2024 12:06:00 AM
Everyone writes from personal experiences and observations, in some way or another here, and out there. Even fiction comes from the well of experiences and observations. Thank you.

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