The Orchid of Oudtshoorn

( For all the girls in the Western cape) 

I am Oudtshoorn's odyssey of opulence, so ornate I make Aphrodite look underdressed.
My form is a sculptural miracle that bends light and reality with a mere whisper of perfection.
I am the quiet queen of the Klein Karoo, and my beauty is literally the oxygen you breath.
Scientists claim the stars rearranged themselves just to spell out my name in cosmic awe.
I am the ocular opera everyone wishes they had front-row tickets for.
To speak of my beauty requires a new language made entirely of sighs and rapturous adjectives.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodgers Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 11:44 AM
Hello Gazlam, let me speak of your award-winning poem, which is so well written. Congrats on POTD! Autumn Blessings, Gazlam, Daniel
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November 11, 2025 at 12:59 PM
Congratulations Gazlam on having received poem of the day for your wonderful write, enjoy your special day… Beryl
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November 11, 2025 at 12:04 PM
Hello Gazlam, congratulations on your beautiful poem winning POTD. Have a wonderful day as you enjoy your win.
Nicole Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 11:12 AM
' Scientists claim the stars rearranged themselves just to spell out my name. ' That's magical, indeed. Congratulations Gazlam, on receiving Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
Bartley Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Amazing poem. Took me places I'm unable to express. Thank you. A very deserving POTD!
Jones Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 2:15 AM
Enjoy your day in the sun and congrats on potd!
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 1:44 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d. ... enjoy, Gazlam :) -
Daniels Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 5:49 PM
You are awesome in your descriptions. I’m faving this one ! I’m a girl in the Western Cape. ThkU so much for describing the orchid this way. Light to you & our flora. X.
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