The Orchid

As an orchid in his life,
a reflection from his strife...
He's a flower in his way
and he would say...

I am living as a poem...
choosing freedom on my own,
and the mask of God would 
speak...
Here is a clue!

From a message he would live
an adventure that would give...
special meaning to his life...
as he went on...

This would be an evolution,
not for him a revolution...
and he danced it all inside...
out in the rain.

All he needed was a room
and a time of day to bloom...
Such a place he didn't know
where to begin.

He brought forth within a day..
what became all in his way...
His experience would say...
Life is a poem!

And he found a sacred place...
he would use it for his space...
find a meaning for his life...
but there was strife!

Pain and suffering he'd achieve,
life with horror_he would leave
all he needed to get back...
was 'on the track.'

It had been there all the while
but his life became a trial...
Could he see or would he 
choose...
another path?

For a life he should be living,
was the one when he was 
giving...
He was living out a dream...
that was his own...

and he became a flower...
in the rain.

All the people in his field
opened doors for him to yield,
a refreshment for his bliss...
but he would miss!

So he followed just a thread...
to a path where he was led...
in a journey that for him,
required a death!

A renewal from his past...
something sacred that would 
last...
One condition for another
he would find...

There were trials and 
revelations...
for a while an incubation.
He found more about himself
as he went on...

Such a dragon he would slay...
no longer bound to his own 
way.to
Something  greater he would 
give
in all his bliss...

From a mystery in life,
he found value in his strife...
and he became a flower...
in the rain.

July 27th, 2012
from The Power of Myth by 
Joseph Campbell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/17/2016 6:36:00 AM
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Date: 11/12/2016 11:02:00 AM
Robert, I love the beginning, the ending and all words in between! Congratulations!!
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Date: 11/12/2016 2:47:00 AM
Congrats Robert, for your placement with this fine piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 11/10/2016 3:36:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 9/26/2012 5:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/25/2012 8:34:00 AM
Soo beautiful!!! Congratulations on your win, Robert! :) Leonora
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Date: 9/24/2012 9:01:00 PM
I can tell you put a lot of thought into this one Congratulations on your HM Robert.
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Date: 9/24/2012 8:08:00 PM
Robert, congrats on your Honorable Mention! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/24/2012 9:40:00 AM
Robert :-). Congratulations with your awesome win in Catie's "Metaphorically Speaking" contest. Have yourself a nice day~ LUV*PD
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