The Orange

Round and ripe... Florida delight... Thick or thin peel... Knife used to reveal... Burst of citrus mist... Surely sun kissed... Fills your mouth with both sour and sweet... As a snack...it can't be beat. P.R.Deremer

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Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 9/3/2015 6:26:00 PM

Pam..I enjoyed this piece...matter of fact and about the here and now...have you read the late British poet Sylvia Plath? Please do...I think it would strengthen your beautiful poetry...Peter.

Pam Deremer
Date: 9/3/2015 6:59:00 PM

No, I've never read anything by Sylvia Plath. I'll try and do that. Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/31/2015 4:58:00 PM

You got my mouth watering Pam:-) hugs Jan xx

Pam Deremer
Date: 8/31/2015 5:19:00 PM

Thank you!