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The Orange

The orange cool in my hands blood orange open in the moonlight breathing in the fresh scent the juices savory stroke my lips blood orange open in the moonlight plump and painted red in my hand the juices savory stroke my lips gloved by stippled orange skin plump and painted red in my hand breathing in the fresh scent gloved by stippled orange skin The orange cool in my hands

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/3/2011 10:02:00 AM
Oh, it sounds so tasty!
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:54:00 PM
Okay, now I'm craving oranges. Nicely written.
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Date: 2/16/2011 8:24:00 AM
very fun to rad work, well done Julie.
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Date: 2/15/2011 4:08:00 PM
Very creative work..Glad that I chose this one to read this eve...Sara
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Date: 2/12/2011 4:12:00 PM
Either you have very small oranges or very big pockets. This looks like a fine example of a pantoum poem.
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