The Onyx Stone

Deep in the forest is a huge stone completely made of onyx and it sits there and shimmers I visit this stone to pray as I sit at its base and wish wonders to be had with the love of my life And the stone talks to me it says I will have happiness and my love and I will be as one I polish the stone of onyx with a soft cloth and it shines so bright This stone tells me the truth and says I will find my way with my love I shall leave the stone and I will get married and will always be thankful for the wisdom it shed
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January 17, 2025 at 11:41 PM
Dear robert, i love the title, as i used to love onyx stones, altho now i prefer black diamonds to onyx, however youv written a very engaging tale, with effortless storytelling throughout on love and more, and having faith and finding light through nature and more: so much has been expressed here and i think you can do storytelling very well: maybe you should write a book of short stories: will keep readers eager to read till the end! Pleasure reading you today: sending you light always
Jones Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 12:27 AM
I love love and that this stone has given you blessings of love! Interesting and charming write!
Liguori Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 7:56 AM
Thanks. I’m glad you like my poem. I like writing about love.
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