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The Onslaught of Night

I look to the sky through a dirty window pane. The sun sets again. by Robert Pettit for Michael J. Falotico's "An Haiku From Your Window" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2011 5:47:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your placement Robert, in the contest "An Haiku From Your Window" sponsored by Michael J. Falotico. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 2/13/2011 2:31:00 PM

Congratulations Robert on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Elaine George

Date: 2/9/2011 4:19:00 AM

Robert! This is a Haiku Masterpiece. Many congrats. Lainie

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/8/2011 8:06:00 PM

Awesome image Robert. Many congratulations for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2011 2:56:00 PM

wow, I had not seen this one yet, Robert.It's awesome and love the title too! (I don't care about haiku not supposed to have titles because I think they are so fun to use them here!) A big congratulations to you and highest rank! LUv, andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/8/2011 2:34:00 PM

One of the first I read and I like it from the start... thank you so much for entering my contest... and for you great write...Michael

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/8/2011 9:23:00 AM

Hi Robert - CONGRATULATIONS on your BIG WIN in Michael's contest. Best wishes, KC

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/8/2011 9:10:00 AM

Delighted to see your compelling poem on the winners' list, Robert. Congratulations. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/8/2011 8:37:00 AM

So glad to see this orginal and clever poem in the winner's circle! A bottle of windex is in the mail for you!! LOL !! Congratulations, Robert!!

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/8/2011 8:02:00 AM

I see this Robert:) Best of luck in the contest! Thanks for your comment on "Camel Travel", much appreciated!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/8/2011 7:24:00 AM

congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2011 7:15:00 AM

Different approach..Congratulations on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/8/2011 4:41:00 AM

Congrats Robert on your wonderful win in Michael's Haiku from my window contest with this creative and visual write my friend.. enjoy another chart topping victory with luv..

James Tate

Date: 2/6/2011 2:25:00 PM

Robert, short and to the point, perfect haiku. Thanks for pointing out my typo for the Architect poem.

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/6/2011 12:33:00 PM

I love the description of the window itself!! Great imagination!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/6/2011 10:11:00 AM

Really like the way you said "onslaught" instead of "onset" of night, Robert. It adds to the dreariness of the vision you paint. Compelling entry for the contest and hope to see your poem in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/6/2011 9:19:00 AM

wonderful haiku, good luck in Michaels contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2011 8:57:00 AM

Interesting direction to go for the contest..Reads like winner's circle to me...Good luck..Sara