The Only Star For Me

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God shrouded the universe in darkness. Is there a human or divine side to blackness? The young dictum's star shines brightly here. I dream when I look at the stars with calmness. Despite my utmost level of grief and fear, In the glittering stardust of a blueish-light, clear. Were we attracted to the bait or a star? When I stroll to the beach dark sphere. To clear the fog from my mental scar. I savor observing the lighthouse's bizarre Sky penetration and rivalry of a laser beam. I reckon I view a gleaming star over a spar. I designate this as my single-star dream. I promise myself to you; my one-star to seem. Boldly shown to gleam brightly in my soul I hear each pulse of my heart as it streams. Fathom a single star in the universe to the extol. I agnize you are my only hope and condole. One star I could view twinkling with delight. I shed a tear on a magical night for that dole. On my birth, you swept from skies with insight. I'd crave for you to kiss me on my lone, starlit night. Fear weaves into shapes, the elixir of love. It focused our psyche life on earth on this site. You are the light of hope, oh anchorite! Move. A birth means God can heal us from above. Guard each itinerary and decompose the ego. Someone who gave the soul evidence of love.
Written: November 06, 2022 The Only Star For Me Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 11/7/2022 5:39:00 AM
Amazing how you write such long poems with ease my friend. Beautiful ode you wrote to your star. Best to you.
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Date: 11/6/2022 8:20:00 PM
The only star here is you. Lasaad,
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Date: 11/6/2022 8:02:00 PM
This is one of your best dear Lasaad ! Love it ! That single star is our only hope and consolation. Walk in its light and you won't have to stray! To my FAVE
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Date: 11/6/2022 10:43:00 AM
- What a beautiful poem, Las - It could have been a song/hymn - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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