Premiere Contest WinnerThe Only Star For Me

When desert heat has burned my feet, I’ll reach you on my knees
And if it would impress you I’d swing naked through the trees
I’d paint myself with honey and I’d swim a sea of bees
I’d do these things and more because it’s you I aim to please

Should the space between us be a thousand miles of ice
I’d cross that wasteland even if my sled was pulled by mice
And if a polar bear was there then I would stand and fight
For you are my fair maiden and I am your fearless knight

If I could I’d drag a trampoline up to the moon
I’d bounce high in the lunar sky if it would make you swoon
I’d reach up and I’d grab the sun and make for you a ring
And if you should accept it then my heart a song would sing

My journey back to earth would be by heart shaped parachute
I know it’s slightly passé but it’s also kinda cute
I would sprinkle sparkles from the pouch fixed to my belt
And in the sky they’d spell out why I felt the way I felt

For you’re my life, my heartbeat, my true purpose and my being
And every star however far and all the stars I’m seeing
I would gather every one that I could ever carry
And I’d go back to gather more if you said we could marry

But just one tiny thing I ask; a marriage contract rider
If ever there should be one, would you save me from a spider
Were I to count the stars above, how pointless that would be
For if you deal with spiders, you’re the only star for me.



3 November 2022
Contest: The Only Star For Me
Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Cunningham Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 11:01 PM
Back with big congratulations Terry on your well deserved trophy win, get the brasso out. Tom
Flood Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 1:23 PM
Thanks, Tom. Spit n polish bloke, me. ;-)
Daniel Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 10:12 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Terry:)
Flood Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 1:19 PM
Thanks, Jo. Appreciated. Terry
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:37 PM
A huge congratulations, Terry, on the trophy win. Loved your poem when I read it before, loving to read it again! The humour is just top-notch...and you are a real romantic!
Flood Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 2:36 PM
Thank you Malabika. I was well chuffed with this result and Most pleased that you enjoyed so much. Terry
Croft Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 11:25 AM
Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations your win
Flood Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 11:38 AM
Thank you, Karen. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
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November 11, 2022 at 9:30 AM
A bit of humor, lots of romance and imagery! I see why you sparkle as the top winner! Congratulations, Terry! ~ Kim
Flood Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 11:38 AM
Thank you, Kim. I actually wrote the whole thing with my tongue firmly in my cheek but, when I read it to Annie, she loved it. Terry
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November 11, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Fabulous Terry, amusing and romantic is what you’d do for your love. Congratulations on your well deserved top spot win in the contest… Belle
Flood Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 11:33 AM
Thank you, Belle. I actually don’t mind spiders. I don’t actively like them but I’m not bothered by them either.. Terry
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November 11, 2022 at 8:28 AM
I'm with you, Terry--I don't like spiders. The only good thing about them is that they don't fly! I hope you've found that spider killer. :) Congrats on your win!
Flood Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 11:31 AM
I only became scared of spiders when I first came across the New Orleans broad winged venomous rabbit munching spider… horrible, horrible beastie, ten legs, fangs, lives behind fridges and flys around the house when it’s dark!……………….Ha ha… I jest, it’s Annie that doesn’t like spiders. I do the catching, but I always let them go… usually behind the fridge ;-)
Cunningham Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 1:02 AM
Give me spiders over flies any day, love the humour Terry, covered in honey swimming through a sea of bees sounds like one of those Japanese games lol. Tom
Flood Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 11:23 AM
It was all her fault… she said she’d bring the chocolate sauce and whipped cream if I brought the honey. ;-)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 2:43 PM
Enjoyed very much. Your "Only Star" is so lucky!
Flood Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 5:36 PM
Thank you, Malabika. I tell her that daily… only kidding. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
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November 3, 2022 at 1:21 PM
terry - it is such a joy to read your rhymes! this is pure delight and the humor at the end is just the icing on the cake...
Flood Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 5:35 PM
Ah, had to have the twist, Ilene… can’t have people accusing me of being some romantic superhero. That’d never do. Glad you enjoyed the icing. Terry
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November 3, 2022 at 12:40 PM
That ought to get it done - enjoyed!
Flood Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 5:32 PM
Thanks, Jeff. I’m not actually scared of spiders but I fancied twisting the tale. Terry
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