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The Only 'sir' He Deserved Should Have Been Serving Time In Prison

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Please ‘fix it’ for the victims of Jimmy Saville He had unlimited access to Stoke Mandeville and abused patients who were vulnerable and ill It’s disgraceful he retains his ‘Sir’ title still Jimmy Saville was a celebrity on the TV Children wrote ‘Jim please fix it for me’ Innocent kids they would sit on his knee For him to remain a ‘Sir’ is a great travesty Running marathons for many a mile Gold tracksuits were his chosen style His fans would cheer and smile Unaware he was a vile paedophile Now full details of his abuse have arisen He should have been locked away in prison Retaining his knighthood needs urgent revision I implore you to reverse your decision Operation Yewtree Contest Sponsored by Catie Lindsey NB He hosted a TV programme called Jim'll fix it' Written by Jan Allison 3/13/18

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Date: 4/6/2018 3:38:00 PM
This is well writen i have a poem called sexual harassment
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 3:43:00 PM
Thanks Marc, he was a vile paedophile who sadly died before justice could be served:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 3/19/2018 2:50:00 PM
Jan, you really wrote a great poem on such a horrible person! Congrats on your placement on such a winners' list. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/19/2018 2:52:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, it too me a week to actually post it, i was unsure if i should write for the contest on such a difficult subject but I'm so glad I did:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/18/2018 9:55:00 PM
Great job, Jan. This was a tough contest, and your write shone through. This guy really gives me the creeps. He seems like Pee Wee Herman on steroids after he stopped greasing and coloring his hair, eh?..Or maybe an athletic version of Rod Blagoevich, the sleazy ex-Illinois governor, whose dark pompadour has turned 'snow-white' in prison....Congrats on your winner. :) Gershon
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/19/2018 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Gershon, i still shudder when i see his pic:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 3/18/2018 2:24:00 AM
Well-said, Jan, and a very powerful and articulate piece of poetic excellence ... who says you can't write "serious"?? Wow. Extremely well done, my friend - blessings and sincere congratulations, on a VERY tough subject.
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Date: 3/18/2018 5:38:00 AM
Thanks Greg, I do surprise with a more serious poem. I wrote this and didn't post it for about a week I found the subject matter so difficult. Public opinion is strong and it would be wonderful if he could be stripped of his title. :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/16/2018 3:12:00 PM
Back with my congratulations Jan, I totally agree writing something on this subject is difficult, I hope it just shows we care. :)
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Date: 3/16/2018 5:44:00 PM
I found it a tough subject to write on but once i got started it flowed quite well:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/16/2018 2:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jan. He even looks like a creep!
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Date: 3/16/2018 5:43:00 PM
He used to make my skin crawl when I watched him on the TV - now I know why:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 3/16/2018 1:47:00 PM
A very powerful write, strong imagination, unique flow of emotions, Jan ! Congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/16/2018 5:42:00 PM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/16/2018 12:52:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Jan.
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Date: 3/16/2018 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Line, it was a difficult subject to write about:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 3/16/2018 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations Jan, well deserved, these predators' have had their day. Tom
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Date: 3/16/2018 11:58:00 AM
Shame he died before he could be bought to justice. It would be wonderful for the victims for him to be stripped of his title but sadly I don't think this will happen:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/15/2018 4:32:00 PM
God knows. This could be in one of those slam rhyme contests, too. Sick man and subject, but your well rhymed and crisp lines once again delight the delivery of your poem and make your point all the more convincingly. To me, this is a winner, the only one I've read, but still a winner. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/15/2018 4:42:00 PM
I was in 2 minds about writing for the contest but he was a vile evil paedophile who used his celebrity status to abuse so many innocent children and adults - over 200 people have said he abused them - sadly he died before he could spend the rest of his life rotting in jail:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/14/2018 2:14:00 AM
Heartuly agree, Jan, a couple of pals of mine were abused by our local Parish priest in the '70s, he went on the run but has been jailed. One of my buddies got financial recompense but is a total wreck, can't hold down a relationship or a job. A life sentence. Good luck in the contest. Viv x
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Date: 3/15/2018 4:42:00 PM
Lets hope karma did get him in the end CayCay:-( hugs Jan xx
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/15/2018 4:32:00 PM
I saw and read, it is sad. There isn't enough money in the world to buy one's childhood innocence back. Surely there is a special hell or karma for these sick, twisted people. Sorry for your friends, Viv, for our world.
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Date: 3/14/2018 8:46:00 AM
Oh Viv that is so so sad and the affects of the abuse are indeed a life sentence to the innocent victims.:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 3/13/2018 8:05:00 PM
Well written Jan, your poem says it all, this evil man should only be remembered as an evil predator, good luck in contest. :)
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Date: 3/14/2018 8:45:00 AM
I have read his grave was totally wrecked Roy,he was just an evil paedophile who used his celebrity status :-( hugs jan xx
Date: 3/13/2018 4:56:00 PM
Hi Jan , great description of an evil twisted bxxxxxx , your pics make me sick but your so right to highlight , I can't believe he has not been stripped of ' sir' :) hugs to you Jan for highlighting
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Date: 3/13/2018 5:08:00 PM
him Rolf Harris, Gary glitter a bunch of vile paedophiles who used to hide under their celebrity status and affected so many innocent people:-( shame he never got prosecuted:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 3/13/2018 1:41:00 PM
Wonderfully expressed Jan!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2018 5:06:00 PM
Still cases of abuse are coming to light and is so widespread . teachers, priests. celebrities and so many young lives have been affected:-( hugs Jan xx
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Donna Roberts
Date: 3/13/2018 4:17:00 PM
Because it is! When I first heard of Catholic priests , I couldn't initially digest it never mind believe it.
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2018 1:56:00 PM
Thanks Donna i found it a very difficult subject to write about:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/13/2018 1:28:00 PM
- "locked in prison" ... NO ... is too little punishment ... he deserves something completely different ... and it's so cruel that I do not want to put the words on my paper - Great written, Jan - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/13/2018 1:30:00 PM
I agree with you Anne Lise and he got away with his crimes as he died before action was taken:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/13/2018 10:12:00 AM
Wow, well written. Well done, Jan.
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Date: 3/13/2018 10:34:00 AM
I found it such a difficult subject to write about Line, there have been several other celebrities like Ralph Harris and Gary Glitter who are serving prison sentences, Jimmy Saville died before he was bought to justice :-( hugs jan xx
Date: 3/13/2018 9:40:00 AM
Well said Jan , how in Gods name was he allowed to get away with it for so long , If you ask me they were all at it and sadly it still goes on , teachers, pop stars, vicars, scout masters, MPs , the list is endless. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 3/13/2018 9:48:00 AM
Thanks Tom, from what I've read it seems the abuse was known about for many years but covered up ... and sadly as you say it still goes on to this day. shame he died before he was bought to justice but to retain his sir title is a travesty but i dont think they are able to do anything about it. hugs jan xx

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