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Colored Pencil Illustration by G.Gaul 4/23

The One-Legged Sandpiper

I saw a one-legged Sandpiper
today on the beach.
I saw him land on his single pedestal,
it was an artful thing.

Entranced by his disability,
I stood transfixed with curiosity.
I so wanted to help him
but we're worlds apart.

How can he feed?
How can he fend?

Suddenly, he flew away up the beach,
I followed him.
There he stood lightly wafting in the wind,
still balanced on that single leg.

His fellow Sandpipers scurry about
unnoticing his remarkable challenge.

Later, a kindly friend told me 
shorebirds often hide one leg
to conserve energy.

Silly, I felt a loss
for my misplaced empathy
towards my one-legged friend.

What a self-centered bubble
I live in.
We're always so troubled by 
what we think we know.
Truth is, we know so little.

Next time on the beach,
I'll look for the one-legged Sandpiper.
It'll remind me that 
there's so much I still don't know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 9:39 AM
Dear Greg, it is a pleasure to return and re-read this once again.. I still love this amazing poem and it's humble, thoughtful beauty; "We're always so troubled by/what we think we know./Truth is, we know so little." - indeed! I adore your colored pencil illustration as well! Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Your artistic talents shine! Warmest wishes, my poet and illustrator friend.. ~Susan
Gaul Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 10:28 AM
Susan, I cherish your visits and your great sense of poetry. I must live up to your kind words. It gives me artistic meaning. Thank you so much.
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 4:24 PM
What a cool topic you pondered on and ended up with an incredible win. Congratulations
Gaul Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 10:30 AM
Funny how little things open to bigger thoughts Andrea. Thanks for your special notice.
Toney Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 1:04 PM
Greg, we can certainly learn a lot from nature. We all need reminders that ‘there is so much we still don’t know.’ And I love your pencil illustration! Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 9 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 10 has already started.
Gaul Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 10:34 AM
Thanks Mark for your poetic judgment and thoughtful hosting
Cornish Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 12:45 PM
Love your introspection Greg!
Gaul Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 10:32 AM
Craigs and Gregs should stick together. Thanks ever so.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 17, 2023 at 1:13 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write/picture. Both a great job. Have a wonderful day..........
Fenn Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 4:01 PM
Well penned! Yes, there’s a lot we don’t know and cant just assume.
Gaul Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 11:32 AM
Jennifer, yes, it's a subtle story of self realization. Shorebirds can even teach us, if we notice. Thank you.
Kauffman Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 11:19 PM
Have had this experience Greg - sending out sympathy to a shorebird I thought was injured only to see them put two feet on the sand feeling relief, and a little silly! Congratulations!
Gaul Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 8:11 AM
Yikes Sam! You're one of the few. Fact is, this scenario repeats throughout my life with different variables. Thanks, as always, for your insight and congratulations for your recent high placements. So nice for you to notice my scribbles.
Ashley Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 8:48 PM
I absolutely adore the sensitive introspection of your beautiful poem, Greg. I was captivated by its thoughtful and meaningful spirit that was so wonderfully expressed. Congratulations on your fine win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gaul Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 3:57 PM
Susan, thanks very much for your thoughtful commentary on my poem. The introspection was and is the crux of the conceit of my poem. Most poems I've read are more absolutist and simplistic in their morality. Your insight is refreshing.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 1:58 PM
Oh I really like this Greg. Congrats on your win! This one's going in to my faves :)) xomo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Woah! I felt like a celebrity for a second there. Ya made me look ;) I got a couple with over a grand. But birds of a feather, maybe, birds tend to flock in my work, along with brooding human nature. Namaste my friend.
Gaul Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:57 PM
Maureen, I'm humbled by your comment. I've looked at the hundreds of poems you've written and seen many with over a thousand views. This piece is so simple and yet you like it. Maybe we are birds of feather of sorts. Namaste.
Hamilton Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 11:44 AM
Nicely done Greg, congrats on a fine placement!
Gaul Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 3:02 PM
John, thanks for recognizing my little piece. Hubris is such fun to write about, especially when it's my own. I appreciate your insight and efforts in running these contests. They truly are a help to novices like me.
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