Beautiful Scars Poet Free verse

The One Who Remains Silent

"THE ONE WHO REMAINS SILENT"

visions of happy encouragement and
loving growth I had been seeking-
I'll never know his name,
but it's just the same
he was the first who welcomed me...
for he was writing...and- I was writing…
and we were both writing for the exact same purpose,
intentions to enhance our passion for writing;
he has inspired that purpose in me with
a gentle reminder-

“the One who
remains Silent speaks
volumes in his
words”

many thanks Sir...


Written By: Laura Loo
Date Written: December 18, 2015

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis January 14, 2016 at 5:42 PM Wonderful short ode of gratitude.

Daniel Turner January 14, 2016 at 1:11 PM Excellent poem. An encouraging word also worked wonders for me. I love it. Beautiful Scars January 14, 2016 at 1:18 PM Thank you very much Daniel :) *smiles*

Joanna Daniel January 11, 2016 at 7:41 AM A true poem on 'The Silent One'. I went through this poem just today..but read and reread it:-} You've said it all. A great tribute to a deserving person... Beautiful Scars January 14, 2016 at 1:17 PM Thank you Joanna..:) *smiles*

Sandra Haight December 26, 2015 at 8:53 AM Laura, I do not know how I missed this, but I want to offer my belated congratulations to you for your lovely poem written as a well-deserved tribute to Silent One. He offers such encouragement to all of us here. Congrats on your POTD! Hugs, Sandra Beautiful Scars December 26, 2015 at 9:17 AM Thank you very much Sandra!! He sure is a blessing..*smiles*

Keith Bickerstaffe December 24, 2015 at 7:50 PM Exquisitely shaped and written! A delightful thank you for the one who shall remain silent. I trust HE knows who he is! Well done Laura! Best wishes, Keith

Jan Allison December 21, 2015 at 4:31 AM Wonderful wonderful tribute Laura Loo I am delighted for you and for him:-) congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx I just posted this on your poem - it ended up on mine lol now I have got POTD too lol:-) hugs jan xxx Beautiful Scars December 21, 2015 at 10:28 AM lol you're silly..shall I say congrats on the potd to you also?? hehe Many thanks once again :)

Mark Woods December 21, 2015 at 3:12 AM I see double congratulations are in order POTD and an outstanding result in the contest. Well done you : ) Beautiful Scars December 21, 2015 at 10:26 AM Thank you very much Mark :)

Eve Roper December 20, 2015 at 11:54 PM What a wonderful tribute, Laura, and congratulations on poem of the day very well deserved! Beautiful Scars December 21, 2015 at 10:25 AM Thank you Eve! :)

Akilah Babb December 20, 2015 at 5:33 PM I love that Akilah Babb December 20, 2015 at 5:42 PM You're welcome and congrats Potd Akilah Babb December 20, 2015 at 5:37 PM You're welcome and congrats Potd Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 5:35 PM Thank you Akilah :)

Casarah Nance December 20, 2015 at 3:25 PM Aww. congrats on poem of the day Laura Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 5:29 PM Thank you Casarah :)

Alexis Y. December 20, 2015 at 3:03 PM Laura, this is an amazing tribute piece to Silent One. I agree the one who remains silent speaks in volumes. Congrats on getting the poem of the day :-) Alexis Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 3:27 PM Thank you Alexis :) *Smiles*

Afolabi Muideen December 20, 2015 at 2:10 PM What a beautiful write, congratulations on having your gem featured.............A.M. Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 2:38 PM Thank you Afolabi:)

James Inman December 20, 2015 at 9:22 AM A poem from your heart, deep and beautiful. Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 11:27 AM Many thanks James! *Smiles*

Richard Lamoureux December 20, 2015 at 9:05 AM I enjoyed this tribute to our friend Silent. Congrats on POTD. Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 11:27 AM Thank you Richard! *Smiles*

Judy Konos December 20, 2015 at 9:01 AM SILENT..... Night.....and Day....FOREVER! Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 11:26 AM Perfectly said Judy!*smiles*

Ralph Sergi December 20, 2015 at 8:06 AM Hi Laura: Very profound poem; my compliments. Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 11:25 AM Many thanks Ralph :) *smiles*

Nette Onclaud December 20, 2015 at 7:48 AM an endearing POTD, laura..congrats! Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 11:25 AM *Smiles* Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 11:24 AM Many thanks Nette:)

Maurice Yvonne December 20, 2015 at 7:06 AM I will add this. It has been said that Shakespeare did not write his works but in fact they were written by another man with the same name. An ironic statement about the man who wrote 'A rose by any other name..' Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 11:23 AM You are deeply right Maurice...luloo

Maurice Yvonne December 20, 2015 at 6:50 AM Let depth of thought led by unconditional love harness and drive our comments. We are and we need to be an oasis of support for all. Kudos on voicing support where support is needed. A beautifully written poem. Congratulations on poem of the day. Lots of Love always Armand. Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 11:22 AM Thank you and I thank Silent One also...he deserves respect more than anyone I know...be blessed *smiles*

Michael Tor December 20, 2015 at 6:42 AM Laura congratulations on having this write posted as POTD. He is one of my favorite writers. His writes touch the inner core of all of us. He shares raw truths that are heartfelt and real. An exceptional writer and caring soul always encouraging others and devoting his personal time to all on the Soup. I like many admire Silent One and are thankful for his presence here. Love your write honoring Silent One a wonderful choice of writers! Michael Tor December 20, 2015 at 5:51 PM Your welcome my friend. Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 11:20 AM Last week I posted he is my mentor..proud to say it! I was criticized for that and it bothered me. He deserves praise as do many others I know. He has never once said anything mean always encouragement to EVERY single poet on PS..thank you Michael for your kind words...-luloo*smiles*

Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 20, 2015 at 6:41 AM lovely tribute to a sweet poet :) well done Laura...congrats for the POTD :)) Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 10:29 AM Thank you very much!!:)

Anne-Lise Andresen December 20, 2015 at 5:38 AM - A lovely poem of the day ! - Congratulations, Laura !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Beautiful Scars December 20, 2015 at 10:29 AM Many thanks Anne-Lise!!:) *smiles*

Eileen Manassian December 19, 2015 at 9:00 AM Lovely poem to a lovely poet, Laura. I've been blessed by Silent One's presence on the site. Great write. Beautiful Scars December 19, 2015 at 11:49 AM Thank you Eileen very much :)-luloo *smiles*

Paul Callus December 19, 2015 at 7:46 AM A lovely tribute coming from the heart, Laura. This is what this site should be...an oasis of encouragement, and a haven for those who are searching for peace of mind. ~ All the best. // paul Beautiful Scars December 19, 2015 at 11:48 AM You are 100% right Paul, many thanks -luloo *smiles*

Jan Allison December 19, 2015 at 6:17 AM A lovely tribute and like all of us he has the right to remain anonymous I just hope he is never Silent!:-) hugs Jan xx Beautiful Scars December 19, 2015 at 11:47 AM Many thanks Jan :)-luloo *smiles

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