The One Who Never Was

With legs quiveringing I stood, 
Over a mountain so high,
Never had I thought, I would,
Reach where only some birds fly.

Afraid to take a step wrong,
And take a fall, far too long,
I walked the pace of a kid,
Never adieu I wanted to bid,
To the heaven to where I had made,
And stand so tall and still not be dead

A gust of wind pushed me then,
Over the edge, so I went,
Got hold of my breath back, when,
I could feel a hand was lent.

An angel, I thought it was,
But then it didn't suit my laws,
Took me a while to fathom,
It was no nymph who had come,
But my own self holding on,
Now with the delusion gone.

A rock I had gripped while on,
My way down to paradise;
I could feel a new me born,
With strength enough to rise.

That was the time when I thought, 
All our wars are to be fought,
With nobody by our side,
Then why do we get so tied,
To the one who never was,
With all his exempted flaws?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 3/20/2020 7:43:00 AM
This is a good expression
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Shubham Chaoji
Date: 3/20/2020 1:49:00 PM
Thank you!!
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