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" BECOMING BETTER " MY PHOTO, ©

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The One Who

The one who

aspires a better human being to be

always ought to keep in mind 

that

his every thought, word and deed

is 

uninterruptedly observed     

by

God's watchful eye!








© Demetrios Trifiatis
      14 APRIL 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Somadas Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 2:47 AM
True..Being a human is the biggest achievement in our human form..Takecare ...
Trifiatis Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 7:36 AM
Thank you dearest friend, Jenish! Hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 3:08 PM
- Under God's watchful eye ... no evil could get past his watchful eye - So true and excellent written, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 4:11 PM
So true my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you for your precious visit and comment! Take good care! Hugs xxx
Cunningham Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 1:17 PM
So true Demetrios, nothing escapes his watchful eye, but he has shown us the way and for many it's an easy path to follow. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 2:29 PM
My friend you are too good a person for to think that it is easy for the many to follow the path he has shown us. I am sorry my friend but if your statement is true then we should have had a great world but reality shows us that we don't. I thank you so much for your support my dearest friend. Keep healthy.
Adams Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 10:47 AM
he sees all good and bad...we should be thankful he easily forgives our sins...love both your words and these flowers this morning (purple is my favorite color) hugs and blessings XoXo
Trifiatis Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 2:25 PM
If one truly repents then God forgives him but not when this person sins having in mind to be forgiven. Thank you for your lovely visit and comment. God bless you! Hugs xxx
Achilles Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 9:16 AM
all seeing, all knowing- but also all forgiving, Bless. Love the photo Dear Demetrios, Hugs Julie xxxx
Trifiatis Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 9:59 AM
Yes, He is all forgiving dearest, Julie! This however doesn't give us the right to sin and then ask for forgiveness! Thank you! Blessings!
Pandit Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 7:19 AM
There is a reward in the end for those strive to be better. Well said, Demetrios. Never seen such lovely colors together!
Trifiatis Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 9:57 AM
Just striving to be better is a reward in itself my dearest friend Vijay! Thank you for agreeing! Blessings!
Manassian Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 5:31 AM
Amen...how often have these very thoughts spoken to my heart and censured me. Nothing is hidden from Him. Blessed poem. Lovely photo.
Trifiatis Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 6:34 AM
It is always a special occasion when I receive your visit and read your comment! You were the first to comment on my poems back in 2012, the old good times! Thank you very much for all your support my beloved poetess! Blessings and hugs xxx
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