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The Omen Harken ghouls and boos, the diabolical wants you solely this festive Halloween eve as we yield cautionary words not to stray ~~or face abduction, by visiting vampires feasting on your blood or an alien journey to their planet as trickery confuse then they paralyzed ~~you with their stun gun. Grim bloodsuckers and unearthly invaders creates a bone-chilling sensation that haunts until its time that all present removes their ~~disguising costumes. 2020 November 01 *9th Place* Halloween Challenge ~~Emile Pinet

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/8/2020 5:58:00 AM

Aloha William. :) I'm back to say congratulations on the win! Linda

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/8/2020 10:20:00 AM

'Tis a welcomed joy as always, Linda, Aloha!

John Watt

Date: 11/7/2020 1:40:00 PM

Nicely written, William. I congratulate you for your esteemed placement; you used the words well and painted a fun, spooky picture of aliens and vampires on Halloween! ~ John

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/7/2020 1:52:00 PM

Thanks, John, a welcomed sharing of the two and cheers to tomorrow's meeting, to the best they'd be, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2020 10:16:00 AM

Way to go in the contest, William. you used the words wonderfully. Congratulations.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/7/2020 10:37:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea, I am made humble again my friend, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/7/2020 10:02:00 AM

:o Your creativity is certainly not in "disguising costumes" my friend! Haunting words, suspense built and released so beautifully in your final lines. Congratulations on your win my friend! Aloha :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/7/2020 10:35:00 AM

Thanks, Sam, y por tu gran triunfo worthy for its placement my friend, Aloha!

Emile Pinet

Date: 11/7/2020 7:22:00 AM

Congratulations William! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my spooky Halloween contest, well done my friend, Emile.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/7/2020 9:24:00 AM

Thank you, Emile, for the wondrous opportunity and the surprising win, Aloha!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/2/2020 8:10:00 AM

Hi William. Fair warning. This is a sure winner! :) Linda

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/2/2020 9:10:00 AM

Thanks, Linda, for the encouragement, Aloha!