The Oldest Profession

The oldest profession, far from abating,
has lost it’s long time faux pas rating.
Now … it’s simply called dating.



(Triplet Inspired by Brian Strand's "Whatever" contest.) 5/12/11
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Fiery Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 1:25 PM
yes i agree with u ....this begs to be read aloud ! Wonderful poem ! congratulations by the way....take carre friend ..Regards SJ
Brown Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 10:17 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest Robert. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 11:37 PM
Or who pays the cheque cannot find me place n time witless willy fails to chime later eh thanks mate Don
Foulk Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 10:17 AM
a great piece you wrote, and yes congrats on your win. thank you commenting on Beautiful Spring Morning
Hunt Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 5:07 PM
Hahah! This is great! Congrats on your win Robert:) R.M.
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 4:54 PM
love it love it love it. Congratulations on your win.
Neels Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 8:54 AM
Witty and your provided some huge smiles again Robert.. Hope your weekend is going good.. Congratulations to you as well :) love Wilma
Onclaud Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 9:51 PM
lol.... great cheers to you robert for the fabulous win! :) hugggs
Gorelick Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 8:34 PM
Well done ...I knew this would be a winner. BG
Devonshire Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:56 PM
:) Big smiles reading this witty write, Rob. You said it well! Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Falotico Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:38 PM
Nice one Robert, glad Im married now and not dating... well maybe lol Congrats My friend!!!
Mehta Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:26 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian, Robert
Sweetheart Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:04 PM
Congrats Robert on your big win in the Whatever contest my friend.. with this excellent entry.. such profound lines..luv.. appreciate your other mail to me .. enjoy them all my friend.. enjoy your win with luv..
Delacroix Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 9:00 PM
Really? Well written triplet rhyme, Robert! Good luck in the contest. Your friend in poetry. Caroline.
Song Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 7:17 PM
Hmmm....this is very tactful, Robt. Best wishes with this rhyming triplet in Brian's contest. Gwendolen
A   Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 3:54 PM
wow! Robert, this puts that word whatever into great aspects of a life gone to waste or fallen..... after all the hard work.. well for some money is money... and just cause there is easy ways to make it,, it does not mean it empowers them,,, its just keeps certain personas where they are meant to be kept... nice inspiration for a thought... thanks for sharing..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 7:53 PM
oh, my GOSH, this is AWESOME.That is exactly what the world has become with the loose morals of today. I see those dating shows where they fall into bed with one date. This deserves a fave!
Guzzi Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 5:56 PM
YIKE! harsh take here I believe there has been casual sex since the dawn of time after all who did Able and Cain marry? monkey maids? ;) Light & Love
Gorelick Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 3:54 PM
Wow, you called it! How times change..lol..Good one. BG
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