The Old Year

The old year is now done and dusted
It has not been without its strifes.
Headlines of war, murder and much more
Daily we hear of terrible atrosities.

Peace seems a long way off
and Mankind not in the mood.
Yet a spark of hope remains
That one day things will change.

This spark if it is fanned,
could catch alight and burn,
bringing world peace 
repairing the harm once done.

People now armed with shovels
replanting all the lost trees.
Animals no longer fearful
turn their trusting eyes to us.

Communities working together
Love for one another freely flowing.
Slavery a thing of long distant past
All this could come to pass.

We just need enough to care
To want to make a change.
Then like the mighty oak,
the seeds will take deep roots.

Just one person who cares
can influence many others
And this world of ours
will once more be paradise.

Written 12/13/2014

contest  I CAN'T BREATHE: A peaceful Protest, An Anthology of Powerful Poems
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dey Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 9:29 AM
Great poet to read....congrats on your lovely win!!
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April 28, 2015 at 12:34 PM
Hi Shadow! Congrats on your top win! Your message ought not to fall on deaf ears! All the best. // paul
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April 18, 2015 at 6:38 PM
Shadow, it was nice seeing Cyndi's "I CAN'T BREATHE, generous list." Hope you enjoyed the showcase of this powerful contest theme, thank you for sharing the message. XOX ~LINDA~
May Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 8:34 AM
A positive message Shadow... congrats on your win
Muravez Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 11:05 AM
I love the 5th stanza. We could work together to end some cruelty in this world just like the way we did in the 19th century
Hamilton Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 12:04 PM
ty Renee so nice to see you glad you enjoyed this pen hugs
Yvonne Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 2:43 PM
Love your attitude on this write full of hope!
Hamilton Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 6:12 AM
ty Maurice have a wonderful festive season hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 7:52 AM
Very wonderful take on the theme Shadow. Gl in contest!
Hamilton Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 6:10 AM
ty Dr Upma hugs
Nance Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 6:21 AM
This is real good, we need a change like this, we need a future where nobody turns fearful eyes in any direction. Great write Shadow :)
Hamilton Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 6:09 AM
ty Casarah hugs
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