The Old Year

The old year is now done and dusted
It has not been without its strifes.
Headlines of war, murder and much more
Daily we hear of terrible atrosities.

Peace seems a long way off
and Mankind not in the mood.
Yet a spark of hope remains
That one day things will change.

This spark if it is fanned,
could catch alight and burn,
bringing world peace 
repairing the harm once done.

People now armed with shovels
replanting all the lost trees.
Animals no longer fearful
turn their trusting eyes to us.

Communities working together
Love for one another freely flowing.
Slavery a thing of long distant past
All this could come to pass.

We just need enough to care
To want to make a change.
Then like the mighty oak,
the seeds will take deep roots.

Just one person who cares
can influence many others
And this world of ours
will once more be paradise.

Written 12/13/2014

contest  I CAN'T BREATHE: A peaceful Protest, An Anthology of Powerful Poems

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/8/2015 9:29:00 AM
Great poet to read....congrats on your lovely win!!
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Date: 4/28/2015 12:34:00 PM
Hi Shadow! Congrats on your top win! Your message ought not to fall on deaf ears! All the best. // paul
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Date: 4/18/2015 6:38:00 PM
Shadow, it was nice seeing Cyndi's "I CAN'T BREATHE, generous list." Hope you enjoyed the showcase of this powerful contest theme, thank you for sharing the message. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/16/2015 8:34:00 AM
A positive message Shadow... congrats on your win
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Date: 1/3/2015 11:05:00 AM
I love the 5th stanza. We could work together to end some cruelty in this world just like the way we did in the 19th century
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Date: 1/3/2015 12:04:00 PM
ty Renee so nice to see you glad you enjoyed this pen hugs
Date: 12/13/2014 2:43:00 PM
Love your attitude on this write full of hope!
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Date: 12/14/2014 6:12:00 AM
ty Maurice have a wonderful festive season hugs
Date: 12/13/2014 7:52:00 AM
Very wonderful take on the theme Shadow. Gl in contest!
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Date: 12/14/2014 6:10:00 AM
ty Dr Upma hugs
Date: 12/13/2014 6:21:00 AM
This is real good, we need a change like this, we need a future where nobody turns fearful eyes in any direction. Great write Shadow :)
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Date: 12/14/2014 6:09:00 AM
ty Casarah hugs
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