The Old Woman

Shawled against 
the damp night chill,
she waits
slumped low, 
crumbled
in her favorite chair.
Old and tired 
she waits.
Eyes, once bright, 
cast a milky stare 
blind to all 
but distant memories 
and moments carved 
treasured wooden dolls 
faces and form 
now whittled away
unrecognizable.
Lines and furrows etch 
the frail countenance
struggling in vain to see
a fast approaching 
destiny.
Daylight dims as twilight fades,
and lurking in the corner there,
A Dark Shadow
smiles. . . . .
as the old woman waits 
Alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 10:41 PM
Very nice piece Gail! Xxxx D.
Roberts Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 10:56 PM
Thank you, Dorian. I am new here and still struggling to find my voice.
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 3:36 PM
this is amazing, Gail. You are a very bright new talent here at Soup. A fave on this one.
Roberts Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 5:16 PM
Andrea. . .Thank you, but I have no idea what I'm doing so any help/ideas/criticism is welcome I've read some of your offerings and am blown away by the imagery and feelings.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 1:52 PM
Very beautiful Gail. I enjoyed reading your poem.
Roberts Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 5:16 PM
Thank you Brenda. . . but I have no idea what I'm doing
Thajudeen Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 12:43 PM
It is risk for the old woman to wait alone.nice.
Roberts Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 5:17 PM
Thank you. I'm trying to learn to put pen to paper and have it turn out to be something decent.
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