The Old Veteran

I met an old veteran the other day.
How old he was I really couldn't say,
But I could tell by his shuffling gait,
That, alas, he was nearing Saint Peter's gate.

In the park with him I wanted to walk.
"No, son," he said, "lets just sit and talk,
And if you are interested I'll tell you,
About my service in World War Two."

"You see, I was a mere private in the infantry,
And was with my buddies storming Normandy.
Then, I wasn't concerned about saving liberty;
The guy next to me was my only priority!"

"I guess a lot of people call us heroes.
We didn't think of that plodding thro' the sloughs.
We just wanted to get the job done,
And ensure that final victory was won!"

After a long pause he said, "Well, I'd better go."
He shuffled off as I mused, he's a super-hero!
My eyes misted over just a wee bit.
It wasn't from the dust, I'll readily admit.

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/15/2010 8:02:00 PM
Lordy Lord! Know I know your secret...I don't think I ever thought of using the rhyming book. Yet still you do your work so fascinating. My poetry comes in a split second. If I do not write it down, I lose the piece of thought. I have a forgetful brain. About this poem, my father is a vetern . He does not like 2 talk much about his friend who is a hero..I also concider all veterns heros...Regardless the job..nice job
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Date: 3/9/2010 9:20:00 AM
very moving poem, you have a way with words.
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Date: 3/9/2010 8:30:00 AM
A +++ Sarge, met a few myself. Great people, great warriors. My Gramps was in the Navy during WW2- I followed in his footsteps, though his were far more devastating. Love reading your words, mt patriotic friend.
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Date: 3/9/2010 8:15:00 AM
Great write! and like true heroes, they never want to take the credit! I enjoy this, Robert and it goes to my favs. Thanks....Peace, Audrey
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Date: 3/8/2010 8:54:00 PM
Another brilliant rhyme Bob from your storehouse of subjects ..excellent story to tell... enjoyed and thankxxx for always reading and commenting so sweetly on my poetry.. I just posted another blog about my son calling from Iraq last night and am going to continue to print out the comments and send to him.. hope u will comment too..luv.. "Sweetheart" thankxxx
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Date: 3/8/2010 7:18:00 PM
Nice story Bob. Probably not too many like him around anymore.
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Date: 3/8/2010 6:09:00 PM
Touchng as usual Robert! Nicely written! Regards Jeralynn
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