The Old Unemployed Man Or a Suburban Poem

His oars (mind, arms, and legs)
were insufficient as propellers to earn a living.
In the underground´s nasty passageway;
or was in his life´s nasty passageway?
Anyway! There, he, like an imbecile, sat,
another torn mendicant, holding up his hand to indifferent passers-by, 
asking for a gaze or just a word of hope. 
Hope! What hope? 

- The hope that remains as a candle into his heart.
the little flame that every day fights the Almighty forlornness -.

At night, unanswered the pray 
the candle would  shrivel;
and he became the symbol of a supplicant without faith,
hopelessly holding up among his hands,
and offering the burned out candle and misery of his life
to others indifferent passers-by.

There, at the underground´s nasty passageway.
Or was it his own life´s nasty passageway?
he huddled and covered with the black cloak of failure, remains sat
in the midst of despair.
Just till tomorrow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roy Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 11:43 PM
So nicely expressed. God bless you.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 12:12 PM
Hello Francisco, the old man is holding onto hope because that is all he has left. So he holds onto hope. Have a nice day my friend.
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