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The Old Tree

It is strange how things that we see and take for granted in everyday life should suddenly instil in our minds a new awareness of their presence A silent moment a brief pause from life's ever quickening pace a moment of peace - in times like these a common thing like a dried old tree becomes alive with beauty It stands like a quiet sentinel who has witnessed many an event through time Time has passed by but it remains silently standing there O Tree! What secrets do you store in your noble branches? How many events have you recorded that man knows nothing of? In your younger days when you wore your mantle of green you nested the carefree birds to their offspring you gave protection When the sun scorched the earth you gave them cool shade On a cool windy night you gave them warmth How pleasant was their song to your ear as they sang a song of thanks to you You were a playmate to the children When they romped at your feet or climbed on your branches you smiled Time grew older and the children became lovers You saw them kiss in your shade soft with the light of the moon The aura of their love touched your leaves and you blushed Today they have all gone away but you still remain silent sentinel still waiting and watching How many untold events have you witnessed faithful keeper of secrets? O that my soul could commune with you and share of your rugged beauty! Most Noble Tree! forgive me for my once-waxen eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/4/2014 6:34:00 AM
Wonderful poem, your favorite one. Congrats on the win, john
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Date: 2/3/2014 7:25:00 PM
what a lovely poem! nice personification; I particularly like the fifth stanza, and the two closing lines - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 2/3/2014 7:14:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/25/2013 11:36:00 PM
John,, Congratulations :-) for your nice win.... Thank you for considering my contest. Good Night ~ Linda ~
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Date: 9/26/2013 4:40:00 PM
nature is such an inspiration to my own poetry so I was drawn to this...lovely, lovely poem...congrats on your win :)
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John Beharry
Date: 9/27/2013 9:28:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra
Date: 9/26/2013 4:32:00 AM
Congrats. Morgan
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John Beharry
Date: 9/26/2013 9:44:00 AM
Thank you, Danesh.
Date: 9/26/2013 12:49:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, john
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John Beharry
Date: 9/26/2013 9:45:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Mehta
Date: 9/25/2013 9:14:00 PM
hello John, congrats , Love ~SKAT~
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John Beharry
Date: 9/26/2013 9:47:00 AM
Thank you, Skat.
Date: 9/25/2013 5:17:00 PM
John, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my Any Poem Goes contest. Exactly what I was looking for, SIMPLE-PLEASING & BEAUTIFUL- teasing the reader with such awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""In The Stars"" OR my latest blog! " Animal Cruelty " at -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15953&PoetID=18720 **LINDA
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John Beharry
Date: 9/26/2013 9:33:00 AM
Thank you, Linda, for the recognition given to "The Old Tree". I wrote this quite a few years ago and it has remained one of my favourite pieces in view of the beautiful emotions it evokes in me whenever I read it. I hope it does the same for others. Thanks again!
Date: 9/16/2013 7:17:00 PM
John, I really loved this poem. I also really love trees as I have written about them and draw them. You really caught the essence of their existence with this exceptional work. Congratulations. Allan
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John Beharry
Date: 9/27/2013 9:34:00 PM
Thank you, Allan. I have viewed some of your poems on nature and am impressed by their depth and your powers of expression for which I commend you. I am humbled by your comment. Best Wishes!
Date: 9/9/2013 2:01:00 PM
GOOD
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John Beharry
Date: 9/10/2013 9:06:00 AM
Thank You, Ryan!
Date: 9/9/2013 2:00:00 PM
Very nice, very nice is inspiring have a poem about a tree too yours is very good
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John Beharry
Date: 9/10/2013 7:48:00 AM
Thank you for your comment, Ryan. I think that trees are some of the most overlooked and taken-for-granted life forms, in spite of the fact that they serve such an important function on our planet. They convert the carbon dioxide that other life forms, including ourselves, exhale into the atmosphere into oxygen, which we breathe in again.

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