The Old Tracks

In my town and only 90 feet
from my house run a pair of old tracks, 
railroad tracks older than my house, 
even older than me, and I am 
become old, very, very old, 
like a tree whose branches betray it 
with every strong gust of wind 
as they fall to the ground, 
leaving less and less of the old tree....

I used to walk in between 
those carefully laid iron rails, 
stepping lightly on the worn wood 
of the old ties as though 
they were made of glass....
I walked the length of my small town, 
I walked the world: I walked where 
passenger trains carried vibrant lives  
and their once warm, now cooling dreams, 
and I felt part of each life, 
now gone to ether and mist--
so too shall my lonely soul 
ride those rails one bright day....

Still, a freight train comes by once 
or even twice a week, and I thrill to hear 
its wailing horn as it cries out 
for a forgotten glory, and the ground shakes 
a bit as the old train lumbers slowly 
by my house and I wait a holy wait 
for the music of its rumbling and 
the cry of its old heart as a young
engineer pulls the whistle and 
sees not that he is driving Eternity.



[n/a in Brian's 'Completely your choice, #6 contest, judged 9/9/20]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 2/9/2024 2:25:00 AM
I’m not sure how I missed reading this gem L. J. but I’m so glad that I have managed to read it now. Wonderful imagery. ‘A wailing horn’ - I hear, see and feel it all through your words. Cheers - Gary
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/15/2024 10:12:00 AM
Thanks Gary-- sorry it took me a few days to get back to you [and yes, I still stop everything to listen to the occasional freight train going by!]
Date: 1/24/2024 10:54:00 AM
Great poem, you placed twice in his contest.. Congratulations on your placement..
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/24/2024 2:39:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 11/17/2021 4:05:00 PM
L.J., I wanted to stop by and congratulate you on your very high placement of your poem 'THE OLD TRACKS'. It was a wonderful entry in the poetry contest 'Railroads, A Historical Glance Back'. Thank you for being a part of the contest, I really enjoyed your poem. I look forward to reading more of your artistic creations, and again, congratulations! ~BJ
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/18/2021 4:07:00 PM
And thank you, BJ--much appreciated!
Date: 10/3/2020 3:08:00 PM
Loved your earlier line till its end, "a tree whose...", Lol, Len, and your last few lines were truly distinguishable that is noteworthy overall, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/4/2020 10:03:00 AM
Aloha, William, and thank you, my friend in paradise!
Date: 2/7/2020 10:27:00 AM
L.J. Congratulations! Wonderful imagery my friend. There is a train line close to us and the freight trains run through at night. Their whistle has become a lullaby for me.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/8/2020 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Sam-- I share your love for that 'other-worldly' sound--I even open the door to get the full effect [have you noticed different engineers have different 'signatures'?]
Date: 3/11/2019 10:13:00 AM
Creative and deep, L.J. CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 3/11/2019 8:48:00 AM
Wow Awesome. Congrats on your well deserved top win, LJ. A FAVE for me.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/11/2019 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Line, much appreciated!
Date: 3/11/2019 8:19:00 AM
Beautiful nostalgic narrative, we all share kindred sentiments of time past. Bits of ourselves. Congrats on this masterful reflection.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/11/2019 9:37:00 AM
Thank you. Greg, I very much appreciate it.
Date: 5/30/2017 1:52:00 PM
Exceptionally penned Len, you took me along your journey wonderfully poetic.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/31/2017 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Craig-- it means a lot to me coming from someone of your word prowess.
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