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The Old Temple

In a small old temple in the lone some hour the tiled floor before the idol silently echoed to me the prayers of the poor people, the prayers of the aged woman since centuries back In that solitude it reflected in silence their worries and pains their faith and devotion through generations passed.

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Date: 11/3/2022 2:11:00 AM
sometimes the intense devotion descends in the old temple!
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Date: 7/31/2018 1:52:00 PM
You are a keen observer, Akham. A thoughtful poem. Many thanks for stopping by to read my work. Best to you. / M
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Date: 7/31/2018 7:55:00 AM
A lovely poem, Akham.
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Date: 7/31/2018 6:45:00 AM
Yes.. part of their being stays there..you speak of spiritual longing for peace.
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Date: 7/31/2018 2:34:00 AM
I too see the reflection of those who seek solace in prayer. // paul
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