The Old Soldier

Just a boy, several years back
As for a care, he had none until that day
Uncle Sam said, he had to go, so the note said
A boy into a man he would grow
It was his duty, that is why he went away
Tear in his mother's eyes, as the note she read

To a battle field in a far off land, he did not know
The wounded, flag covered caskets, bullets and bombs
And all the terrible things he would see
He had to keep his country fee, he had to fight the foe
Every second was like  a thousand Vietnam 's
Wondering why God, all this misery

What he saw in battle, he could never forget
They were in his dreams, each and every night
The memories he brought back home yesterday
The war would never quit
He could not bury them or put them out of sight'
No matter how hard he would pray

And of all the terrible things, there was no healing
Or all the hurt, that never goes away
Praying God would give him an answer
And stop this terrible feeling
And help him make it through an another day
He was just twenty years old...........THE OLD SOLDIER

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/11/2010 11:04:00 AM
Damn. powerful words here, i have alot of close friends and family in the military. nice work. xo Rain. p.s. do me a favor? read and comment my newest poem? thank you <3
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Date: 12/17/2009 3:53:00 PM
nice tribute to the soldiers, enjoyed reading, nicely penned.
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Date: 12/17/2009 12:43:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry with us today Danny. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/17/2009 11:52:00 AM
A stirring write. I believe you have done well to capture the toll of war. A split second can truely seem like a lifetime in heavy combat. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 12/17/2009 8:14:00 AM
So much truth in this sad, and haunting poem, of the experience of one so young...how quickly he grows old. Well done, Anthony. ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/17/2009 4:25:00 AM
Exceptional write and you are correct unless a person has lived through it they have no idea the toll it takes. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/17/2009 3:44:00 AM
Very descriptive and emotional write. There is no way that we as the public can know what our young men and women go through and what they bring back with them in my emotions and dreams. Keep the creative and descriptive pen flowing. Sara
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