The Old Scribe

If he were alive now, he would indeed be old,
my father, the scribe who held the code.
Genetic link passed on to me,
arranging words like these you see.

I would see him, pen in hand, late at night,
writing beneath the desk lamp light.
He showed me once a poem sublime,
mundane words transformed in rhyme.

I thought no more as it was past bedtime,
leaving him for the bedroom that was mine.
Skipping over that carpet frayed,
wishing now that I had stayed.

He died years later before his time.
His amazing poem held in my mind.
Until as an adult that seed has bloomed,
generation to generation, womb to womb.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 9/2/2020 12:40:00 PM
Lucky for us he did Jean. All my dad left me was memories. Nicely penned.
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/2/2020 1:37:00 PM
Hi Daniel. Looking good on your latest profile. I wish I could kick stare my muse again. Long winter nights here let imaginations run riot, so here's hoping.
Date: 7/15/2020 8:37:00 PM
Such a lovely tribute to your grandfather, Jean! He has passed on wonderful gifts to you. Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/16/2020 12:43:00 AM
Thank you Rhonda. I feel my children also have untapped potential. Time will tell.
Date: 7/14/2020 4:43:00 PM
very touching, jean! i enjoyed...
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/14/2020 6:05:00 PM
Hi Ilene. I sometimes wish we as children could have had adult chats with those we turned into.
Date: 7/14/2020 3:00:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Jean, great for a win. Hugs Eve
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/14/2020 3:06:00 PM
Hello Eve and thank you. Definitely from my father's side, that spark.
Date: 7/14/2020 2:56:00 PM
The only way that we are any different, is in just exactly how we hone each of our individual talents with our Creator entrusted to us by Him together with everyone, and with all life! All aimed in the direction of our "Consistent and Continuing" support for one another as we surrender this effort "All" away to our Creator, to all life, to ourselves, to a foe, or to a friend, child, woman, or man, within whatever country! All advancing within the "Blessed Infinity" of this very moment!
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Date: 7/14/2020 3:04:00 PM
For sure James. They are truly gifts that cannot be explained away. My favourite of all is my love of music and dance. From my father, a "gifted" musician and singer. How apt that oft' used title suddenly seems.
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