The Old Rocking Chair

Sold to pay the rents due, the last remaining fossil of what were true.







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Date: 11/07/2016
Premiere Contest: One, One Liner - Theme The Old Rocking Chair
Sponsor: Rick Parise
Form: Monoku 
Syllables: 17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Very good Monoku on the theme ... Nice ...
Kundu Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 10:52 AM
Thank you Mr. Gupta!
Allison Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 2:55 AM
oh so so sad Tamal I love your interpretation of the theme:-( hugs Jan xx
Kundu Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 5:26 AM
I'm glad. :) Thank you for reading and happy Monday, Jan!
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