Balveen Cheema Poet Prose

The Old Rocking Chair

Grandpa's old rocking chair lies varnished in the altar of my antiquated dreams.





                                 November 5, 2016
                                    For Rick Parise
                                    One, One Liner

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Elaine George November 28, 2016 at 9:27 AM Wonderful writing, Balveen. Many congrats on your win. Elaine Balveen Cheema November 29, 2016 at 3:29 AM Glad you found it wonderful, Elaine! Balveen

Nette Onclaud November 11, 2016 at 2:31 PM You rose to the occasion, kim.. winning greetings for your highest win!..huggs Balveen Cheema November 12, 2016 at 3:06 AM Thanks Nette! 'It's you Balveen' sounded so loving! Love, Balveen Nette Onclaud November 11, 2016 at 2:48 PM it's you, BALVEEN!

Charlie Smith November 10, 2016 at 12:15 PM Well done Balveen, congratulations... Balveen Cheema November 12, 2016 at 3:07 AM Thanks Charlie for appreciating it,

Jan Allison November 8, 2016 at 12:33 PM Beautiful one liner Balveen Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Balveen Cheema November 12, 2016 at 3:09 AM Thanks Jan & love! Balveen

Anu Nayak November 8, 2016 at 12:25 PM Dear Balveen, lovely write:) Congratulations on top win!//love,Anu:) Balveen Cheema November 12, 2016 at 3:09 AM Many thanks Anu! Love, Balveen

Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2016 at 11:45 AM - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Balveen ! - A lovely line - // Sun :) Balveen Cheema November 8, 2016 at 11:56 AM Thanks for your pleasant visit and appreciation, Sunshine! Love, Balveen

Alexis Y. November 8, 2016 at 8:14 AM Hi Balveen, Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Balveen Cheema November 8, 2016 at 8:34 AM Thanks Alexis! Always nice to hear from you. Balveen

Sonia Walker November 8, 2016 at 8:11 AM Balveen, congratulations on your first-place win. A lovely poem. ~ Sonia Balveen Cheema November 8, 2016 at 11:54 AM Thanks for your appreciation, Sonia! Balveen

Kim Rodrigues November 8, 2016 at 7:47 AM Congrats! Balveen Cheema November 8, 2016 at 7:50 AM Thanks!

Heidi Sands November 8, 2016 at 5:47 AM Congratulations! :) Balveen Cheema November 8, 2016 at 7:50 AM Thanks!

Darren White November 8, 2016 at 2:08 AM That is so beautiful, great imagery Balveen Cheema November 8, 2016 at 7:51 AM Thanks for your appreciation, Darren!

Joanna Daniel November 8, 2016 at 1:39 AM Congrats on trophy win, Balveen:) awesome one liner:) Balveen Cheema November 8, 2016 at 7:51 AM Glad you like it Jo! Balveen

Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2016 at 3:57 PM oh VERY clever symbolism, Balveen. Way to go!! Balveen Cheema November 8, 2016 at 7:53 AM Thanks for your appreciation, Andrea!