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The Old Rocking Chair

Grandpa's old rocking chair lies varnished in the altar of my antiquated dreams. November 5, 2016 For Rick Parise One, One Liner

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Elaine George

Date: 11/28/2016 9:27:00 AM

Wonderful writing, Balveen. Many congrats on your win. Elaine

Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/29/2016 3:29:00 AM

Glad you found it wonderful, Elaine! Balveen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/11/2016 2:31:00 PM

You rose to the occasion, kim.. winning greetings for your highest win!..huggs

Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/12/2016 3:06:00 AM

Thanks Nette! 'It's you Balveen' sounded so loving! Love, Balveen

Nette Onclaud
Date: 11/11/2016 2:48:00 PM

it's you, BALVEEN!

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/10/2016 12:15:00 PM

Well done Balveen, congratulations...

Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/12/2016 3:07:00 AM

Thanks Charlie for appreciating it,

Jan Allison

Date: 11/8/2016 12:33:00 PM

Beautiful one liner Balveen Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/12/2016 3:09:00 AM

Thanks Jan & love! Balveen

Anu Nayak

Date: 11/8/2016 12:25:00 PM

Dear Balveen, lovely write:) Congratulations on top win!//love,Anu:)

Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/12/2016 3:09:00 AM

Many thanks Anu! Love, Balveen

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2016 11:45:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Balveen ! - A lovely line - // Sun :)

Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2016 11:56:00 AM

Thanks for your pleasant visit and appreciation, Sunshine! Love, Balveen

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/8/2016 8:14:00 AM

Hi Balveen, Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2016 8:34:00 AM

Thanks Alexis! Always nice to hear from you. Balveen

Sonia Walker

Date: 11/8/2016 8:11:00 AM

Balveen, congratulations on your first-place win. A lovely poem. ~ Sonia

Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2016 11:54:00 AM

Thanks for your appreciation, Sonia! Balveen

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/8/2016 7:47:00 AM

Congrats!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2016 7:50:00 AM

Thanks!

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/8/2016 5:47:00 AM

Congratulations! :)

Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2016 7:50:00 AM

Thanks!

Darren White

Date: 11/8/2016 2:08:00 AM

That is so beautiful, great imagery

Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2016 7:51:00 AM

Thanks for your appreciation, Darren!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/8/2016 1:39:00 AM

Congrats on trophy win, Balveen:) awesome one liner:)

Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2016 7:51:00 AM

Glad you like it Jo! Balveen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2016 3:57:00 PM

oh VERY clever symbolism, Balveen. Way to go!!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2016 7:53:00 AM

Thanks for your appreciation, Andrea!