The Old Rocking Chair Premiere Contest Winner

Grandpa's old rocking chair lies varnished in the altar of my antiquated dreams.





                                 November 5, 2016
                                    For Rick Parise
                                    One, One Liner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/28/2016 9:27:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Balveen. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/29/2016 3:29:00 AM
Glad you found it wonderful, Elaine! Balveen
Date: 11/11/2016 2:31:00 PM
You rose to the occasion, kim.. winning greetings for your highest win!..huggs
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/12/2016 3:06:00 AM
Thanks Nette! 'It's you Balveen' sounded so loving! Love, Balveen
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 11/11/2016 2:48:00 PM
it's you, BALVEEN!
Date: 11/10/2016 12:15:00 PM
Well done Balveen, congratulations...
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/12/2016 3:07:00 AM
Thanks Charlie for appreciating it,
Date: 11/8/2016 12:33:00 PM
Beautiful one liner Balveen Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2016 3:09:00 AM
Thanks Jan & love! Balveen
Date: 11/8/2016 12:25:00 PM
Dear Balveen, lovely write:) Congratulations on top win!//love,Anu:)
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Date: 11/12/2016 3:09:00 AM
Many thanks Anu! Love, Balveen
Date: 11/8/2016 11:45:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Balveen ! - A lovely line - // Sun :)
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Date: 11/8/2016 11:56:00 AM
Thanks for your pleasant visit and appreciation, Sunshine! Love, Balveen
Date: 11/8/2016 8:14:00 AM
Hi Balveen, Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 11/8/2016 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Alexis! Always nice to hear from you. Balveen
Date: 11/8/2016 8:11:00 AM
Balveen, congratulations on your first-place win. A lovely poem. ~ Sonia
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Date: 11/8/2016 11:54:00 AM
Thanks for your appreciation, Sonia! Balveen
Date: 11/8/2016 7:47:00 AM
Congrats!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2016 7:50:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 11/8/2016 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations! :)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2016 7:50:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 11/8/2016 2:08:00 AM
That is so beautiful, great imagery
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2016 7:51:00 AM
Thanks for your appreciation, Darren!
Date: 11/8/2016 1:39:00 AM
Congrats on trophy win, Balveen:) awesome one liner:)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2016 7:51:00 AM
Glad you like it Jo! Balveen
Date: 11/7/2016 3:57:00 PM
oh VERY clever symbolism, Balveen. Way to go!!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2016 7:53:00 AM
Thanks for your appreciation, Andrea!
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