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The Old Man and the Lord

There was a certain very, very, old man of Stamford,

who was asked to appear before a very great lord,

his heart then beat very wildly,

and he jittered around madly,

he tumbled and died, and in heaven met the greatest lord.

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Beata Agustin

November 26, 2024 at 8:06 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

March 8, 2016 at 10:51 AM

Segun, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

January 10, 2016 at 2:43 PM

Hello, Segun Ogundeko,, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing... SKAT

Joseph Osita

May 24, 2011 at 2:53 AM

Segun,This is very humourous.You are a great limerick poet! Best wishes!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 21, 2011 at 8:36 AM

thankxx SEGUN for your very kind words on my poetry .. I find yours most enjoyable as well luv.. so much interesting info in a few lines speak so much.. enjoy your weekend ..

Andrea Dietrich

May 18, 2011 at 1:50 PM

HI, segun. I like how he went from not meeting the lord on earth to meeting THE only Lord in heaven!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 18, 2011 at 1:35 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your sweet creative write tonight..what a way to go and be in the presence of the Lord... hope u have fun on P.S. as u share with luv..