The Old Kite

Saw 
                                                                              An     old      kite 
                                                                              today It is use to 
                                                                         fly high, mister Give it 
                                                                    some wind And it went all the 
                                                              way The little, boy, said The kite had 
                                                          a pretty tail And papers that tell The pride of 
                                                      the maker’s hand Before ravaged by the wind 
                                                   The frame was good The old bamboo bones Still kept 
                                                          the shape That made the village shout When it 

                                                             hovered over The still landscape. It was the 
                                                                     paper The paper ragged and torn

                                                                       Sagged and flapped at the rips
                                                                             Like an old man’s skin
                                                                                      Hollow in the
                                                                                         Wind
                                                                            boy’s eyes 
                             were bright And looking in them Saw 
                       Down
                                the vista of the years And prayed for him That someone 
                                                                                                           Will 
                                                                                               cuddle him 
                                                 again When he stands here as I
                            Like he cuddles 
                              The 
                                    old kite now
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Winter Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 7:12 AM
Wow. An amazing piece of art here. Beautiful presentation, nostalgic and emotional content. Makes me sad at the very end. An awesome and truly excellent poem! Love, Shar
Austin Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 6:06 AM
Great flight of fancy...nostalgic....soaring. I really like this one, David. I'll read more later. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver
Goff Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 6:58 PM
David, love the compassionate ending, very emotional! really creeps up on you! great! Jim
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