The Old House Beside the R Oad

The Old House Beside the Road

There is an old, ramshackle house that stands there by the road.
This house once had a family, with many stories stowed
Within its crumbly walls, and it now stands there all alone,
With gardens dead, untended yard, and weeds much overgrown.

The broken windows, tilting shutters, steps that rotted down,
And paint that once was bright and white but now shows dingy brown,
Would cause most people to ignore this rundown old abode,
This old ramshackle house that stands just there beside the road.

An ancient giant willow oak looms o’er the dried-up well,
And just beyond, there hangs an old and rusty dinner bell,
A frazzled rope with rotted seat shows where a child had swung.
Around in back, a wagon stands with half a broken tongue.

I wish this house could talk to me
And tell me how things used to be,
How happy it was when love flowed
In this old house beside the road.

I think this house has heart and soul with many tales that lie untold.
So many things that it might say, if only it could speak today.
For now, I’ll just enjoy my thoughts of all the things that time has wrought.
In this dear old, rundown abode that stands beside the road.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/27/2017 5:49:00 AM
I really love this poem of yours. There is an old house down the road where we live, and I have always wondered when I pass it what secrets it holds.
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Date: 4/26/2017 9:33:00 PM
very homey, raises sentimentality to a warm level. Very nice job
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Date: 6/19/2016 4:56:00 PM
Yes, if only it could talk Yvonne there would be many tales to tell - vivid descriptive write I do like your style - I am not good at iambic pentameter myself!:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Yvonne Uzzell
Date: 6/19/2016 6:13:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment. Iambic pentameter is about all I can do. LOL. Not good at others types, at all. 8-)
Date: 6/18/2016 10:10:00 PM
Lovely poem Yvonne, I really enjoyed the read. Lovely picture you have painted. Kind regards, Craig
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Yvonne Uzzell
Date: 6/18/2016 10:18:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate that you took the time to read it. 8-)
Date: 6/18/2016 8:51:00 PM
Very nice imagery in your poem Yvonne; I betcha Chip and Joanne could fix this fixer upper!:)
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Yvonne Uzzell
Date: 6/18/2016 9:00:00 PM
Good thought! But they'd gut it and make it look different. LOL Thanks for the review and nice comment. 8-)
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