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The Old House At the End of the Road

The Old House at the End of the Road The old house stood as a silent token of days long past and times unspoken; a memory of what used to be. Forlorn and old it stood its ground; but around its walls are haunting sounds amid the rotting gray debris. The laughter’s silent party noise is missing with the party boys and girls in fancy good-time dress, no longer gracing rooms and halls or sweet sixteen and party balls; gone, all but memory’s sweet caress. The grass is dead around the edges, and holes are left where once grew hedges near by the picket fence now gone; the leafless tree will stand its guard until there are no steps or yard, and darkness falls with western sun. I saw that house in its glory days when kissed by sun and golden rays, but it has fallen on hard times now. Gone are the occupant’s rigid dreams all but a memory, or so it seems, but it will live again somehow. It lives again in hearts and minds of those who lived there and their kind; who live and love and do their best to live the way life ought to be with carefree grace beneath the tree to stand against time’s onward quest.

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Date: 12/30/2016 6:16:00 PM
I like the way you constructed your verses that seem to take the reader along with you down a winding road to the old house at the end where memories were born an live on. Nice. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/10/2015 2:56:00 PM
This is a most excellent poem, Merwin! I love how you capture the history of what happened in the old house and the melancholy feeling of times gone by. A 7 from me!
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Merwin Rylaarsdam
Date: 2/11/2015 12:13:00 AM
Thanks, Laura. After seeing a picture of an old house in western Montana, I felt the urge to write about it. Often when I see an old house I think of the hopes and dreams the people who built it must have had. Those places were someone's dream once upon a time! Thanks for your words of encouragement. Merwin
Date: 2/10/2015 9:25:00 AM
What a lovely write...can see in my mind the picture you painted with your words...the house, elegant and proud, during it's glory days... A 7 and more smiles from the land of thousand isles...Kim ;)
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Merwin Rylaarsdam
Date: 2/10/2015 11:24:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate your words of encouragement.

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