The Old House

An old house

Move swiftly when passing by

Windows like eyes see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 8:19 AM
There's something quite "haunting" about these old houses, Sharon. I love the way you describe how its windows are watching us. Excellent work! So good to be back home and reading your wonderful poetry again. Love and blessings, Carolyn
Dufresne Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 5:15 PM
heck of a Haiku, Sharon. Think to the tune of "twilight zone " ....Eerie walking past those empty abodes .... It does feel like someone or ..."thing" .....is watching you !
Neels Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 10:21 AM
Sharon I enjoyed the feelings you conjured up with this write of yours.. Love Wilma
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 11:51 PM
wow, I really love the feeling this one gives.
Pettit Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 8:43 PM
I can suddenly hear that old song from the fifties as I read this impressive entry.
Mehta Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 5:50 PM
Nice visual of the old house, Sharon
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