The Old Hen

There was an old hen in a coop, Her favourite dinner was soup, And the eggs in her nest Were the biggest and best, But covered in inches of poop. For Susan’s contest

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Robert Johnson

Date: 3/7/2014 5:14:00 PM

Mmm. Mmm. Can't wait for eggs and toast in the mornin'. I think I'll skip the hollandaise sauce. Peace. :)

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 10/3/2013 10:10:00 AM

Hilarious limerick. I love poems about chickens. Great write.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 9/14/2013 4:00:00 AM

Funny, funny, funny limerick Jack!...Many congrats - Tim

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/12/2013 5:02:00 PM

Funny ! Very witty and fun to read ...congrats on your win :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/11/2013 7:37:00 PM

stopping by again to say congrats on your fine win :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2013 3:51:00 PM

LOVED it, I just knew Susan would too. CONGRATS.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/10/2013 7:56:00 AM

aw!! hahahaha..makes me laugh while reading this funny poem of yours friend Jack :) :) Congratulations on your win.. cheers!!! Maria

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2013 8:28:00 PM

Jack, congratulations on your win ~SKAT~ :-)

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/9/2013 6:51:00 PM

How true !! Anyone who collects eggs from the chicken coop would know!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/9/2013 6:29:00 PM

Hi Jack, a fine win... xox..Linda

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/9/2013 5:28:00 PM

Coop, soup, poop Cool. congrats on a funny win. BG

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/9/2013 4:06:00 PM

I knew this one would place! Congrats on your 1st place win, Jack! Love, Kim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2013 3:52:00 PM

Congrats on your great win..Did you have eggs for lunch?...Congrats..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2013 12:12:00 PM

- Jack ... CONGRATULATIONS WITH A FINE FIRST PLACE!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/6/2013 10:39:00 PM

LOL! As always, I love your humor, Jack! Good luck for Susan's contest, even though you don't need it 'cause it's already a winner! Always, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2013 11:24:00 AM

Hello Jack, how are you doing? and about the limerick... not such a good smell... but fun one to read... xox~ Linda

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/31/2013 8:12:00 AM

lol...too cute...am thinking I won't want to eat eggs any time soon...thanks for making me giggle this morning :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/30/2013 1:15:00 PM

How funny! Good limerick, Jack! Love, Kim

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/30/2013 10:32:00 AM

HA HA HA, you have surely got me laughing with this very clever write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a fantastic piece, such a grandiose verse, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2013 10:24:00 AM

hahaha, I think Susan is gonna love this.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/30/2013 10:05:00 AM

cute one, jack!