The Old Dog

At a point where the old road meets the hill
and runs down the other side
There's an old tin shed that's standing, still
and a grave where the old dog died

He surely had seen better days
when our paths chanced to cross
As I lit up a fire and laid out my swag
he got up and wandered across

I could see from the look in the old dog's eye
that his race was almost run
but he sat by my side and offered his paw
So I gave him a pat and a bun

I cooked up some meat and he chewed on a bone
then he rested his head on my swag
We sat and we watched as the stars all came out 
and his tail did a slow steady wag

We fell fast asleep and I woke with the sun 
to find the old dog passed away
So I gathered him up and I buried him deep
and sadly I went on my way

It was later that morning I stopped at a farm 
to ask about work round about
and I happened to see a new litter of pups
one turned and came waddling out

He sat on the ground and he offered his paw
and I saw a strange glint in his eye
Had the old dog returned? Was he telling me now 
that I shouldn't be sad that he'd died?

Well I picked him right up and his warm puppy tongue
quickly licked off the tear from my cheek
I couldn't think straight, I was stunned and choked up
and found my knees going all weak

So I bought him right there and I gathered him up 
He settled right down in my swag
As I walked down the road I could feel the odd thump
as his tail did a slow steady wag.


From my PDF book "Bush Ballads and Bulldust"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/18/2018 2:17:00 PM
This verse brought tears to my eyes and touched my heart. Your story, how it plays out is beautiful, Marc. I love it, a favorite!
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Date: 12/30/2018 7:24:00 AM
Even though I wrote it I sometimes get that reaction on re-reading it. Apologies for the late reply but I have only just discovered where the reply link is located :)
Date: 12/1/2018 1:19:00 AM
You Ausie's are making a habit of good poetry. We might have to entice you this side of ditch so we can claim you as our own and give you taste of some real pavlova. Bring some Philadelphia cream cheese the only one I use for making homemade cheesecake. Our prayers with you re fire risk your side of ditch. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 12/30/2018 7:22:00 AM
Actually I am a Pom but I have been here a loooong time :)
Date: 11/30/2018 6:33:00 PM
G'day Marc … what a pleasure it is to read such a well written bush ballad with such an interesting tale. A real campfire yarn - thank you Marc - Lindsay
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Date: 12/30/2018 7:22:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the poem. Apologies for the late reply but I have only just discovered where the reply link is located :)
Date: 11/30/2018 7:29:00 AM
Wow! What a terrific poem, and rare find. Well done. Well done.
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Date: 12/30/2018 7:20:00 AM
Thanks, my apologies for the late reply but I have only just discovered where the reply link is located :)
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