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The Old Dog

At a point where the old road meets the hill and runs down the other side There's an old tin shed that's standing, still and a grave where the old dog died He surely had seen better days when our paths chanced to cross As I lit up a fire and laid out my swag he got up and wandered across I could see from the look in the old dog's eye that his race was almost run but he sat by my side and offered his paw So I gave him a pat and a bun I cooked up some meat and he chewed on a bone then he rested his head on my swag We sat and we watched as the stars all came out and his tail did a slow steady wag We fell fast asleep and I woke with the sun to find the old dog passed away So I gathered him up and I buried him deep and sadly I went on my way It was later that morning I stopped at a farm to ask about work round about and I happened to see a new litter of pups one turned and came waddling out He sat on the ground and he offered his paw and I saw a strange glint in his eye Had the old dog returned? Was he telling me now that I shouldn't be sad that he'd died? Well I picked him right up and his warm puppy tongue quickly licked off the tear from my cheek I couldn't think straight, I was stunned and choked up and found my knees going all weak So I bought him right there and I gathered him up He settled right down in my swag As I walked down the road I could feel the odd thump as his tail did a slow steady wag. From my PDF book "Bush Ballads and Bulldust"

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Date: 12/18/2018 2:17:00 PM
This verse brought tears to my eyes and touched my heart. Your story, how it plays out is beautiful, Marc. I love it, a favorite!
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Marc Glasby
Date: 12/30/2018 7:24:00 AM
Even though I wrote it I sometimes get that reaction on re-reading it. Apologies for the late reply but I have only just discovered where the reply link is located :)
Date: 12/1/2018 1:19:00 AM
You Ausie's are making a habit of good poetry. We might have to entice you this side of ditch so we can claim you as our own and give you taste of some real pavlova. Bring some Philadelphia cream cheese the only one I use for making homemade cheesecake. Our prayers with you re fire risk your side of ditch. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 12/30/2018 7:22:00 AM
Actually I am a Pom but I have been here a loooong time :)
Date: 11/30/2018 6:33:00 PM
G'day Marc … what a pleasure it is to read such a well written bush ballad with such an interesting tale. A real campfire yarn - thank you Marc - Lindsay
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Marc Glasby
Date: 12/30/2018 7:22:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the poem. Apologies for the late reply but I have only just discovered where the reply link is located :)
Date: 11/30/2018 7:29:00 AM
Wow! What a terrific poem, and rare find. Well done. Well done.
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Date: 12/30/2018 7:20:00 AM
Thanks, my apologies for the late reply but I have only just discovered where the reply link is located :)

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