The Old Cat

The old gray cat sleeps Through most of the day He came to my door As a scraggly stray

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Date: 3/26/2009 1:42:00 PM

Sounds like he found a home, one he is comfortable with. Nice slant on goodwill. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my lanterne. Keep on writing! Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/26/2009 11:16:00 AM

How nice of you for taking him in, nice job...Raul

David Smalling

Date: 3/26/2009 7:40:00 AM

We are all cats in some ways at God's door, the only place we feel secure enough to sleep. God Bless you

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2009 7:25:00 AM

Very loving description of the "old gray cat," Jim! The ones who find their way to our doors by chance are often the pets we love the most. Nice work! Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/26/2009 7:10:00 AM

We've "aquired" a calico just like this! Makes me smile....that is one happy cat!! (Lucky too!) ~ Carrie