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The Old Car by Robert (Bob) Moore © 2016 Remember when we used to say “I’ve got to trade this car” it hard to start in the mornings and it won’t go very far The linkage to the gears all shot the timing just don’t time if I find someone silly enough I’ll sell it for a dime Just when you think your minds made up and tomorrow it’s a trade it seems as though it reads your thoughts and steps it up a grade It started great this morning and the linkage worked just fine I’ve driven quite a distance and the timing seems in time She seems to know what I’ve been thinking and is trying to change my mind and show, even if I go looking a better car I just won’t find I know she has done this before the decision’s been prevented and I have not shown her the door like a fool I have relented but this time she just has to go she just cannot be trusted she’ll start it all again I know but this time, she’s been busted

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/5/2016 2:24:00 AM
I love your delightful and entertaining poem. It was a blast to read, even read it to my husband. Not only nostalgic in a sense, but a realistic reference to one Murphy's Law: when you quit it, it works, when you want to work it, it quits. Great poem ... CayCay
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Date: 6/5/2016 4:17:00 AM
Thanks CayCay, I have had it happen a few times lol Cheers Bob

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