The Old Abandoned Well

Her baby fine hair sheenes as gold as the wedding band she dumped down the old abandoned well.
Her porcelain skin bares scars from the shards of broken promises.
Abuse still shadows the hollows of her pale blue eyes.

She caresses the tiny bump in her belly.
The innocence nestled there was the courage she needed.
Vindication looms in the bluish purple boot print stamped just above it.
Her ability lay spent in brass on the bedroom floor.

The sun beaming through the windows seems brighter, the air lighter today.
A long forgotten calm washes over her, awakening a peace that has lain dormant in her soul.

Out in the field, centered between the tracts of the old tractor, evil has left it's final mark on this world.
The trail,  just a man's shoulder width has already begun to fade.

She removes her wedding band, a haunting symbol of the past three years of hell.
His is tightening on his bloating finger, at the bottom of the old abandoned well.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/25/2017 6:42:00 AM
Hi Arlene. This is such a strong and emotional poem. The old abandoned well is now the home of evil, never to be feared again. Her baby is safe. this is so well written that it will be added to your other poems that are on my favorite list. I hope all is well with you Arlene..... Robert.
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Date: 1/5/2017 2:42:00 PM
Wow, this was dark and sinister but so damn strong and well written. I felt the sadness and the fear in hear heart but also the freedom once the monster had met the bottom.
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Date: 1/5/2017 2:29:00 PM
My goodness, Arlene - This is indeed powerful stuff! I certainly was not expecting this sort of read when I was invited in by the title...I am rather impressed. Fantastic last line - Very well done! All my very best for your New Year - Cheers! :) john
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