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THE OCEANs DEED

THE OCEAN’S DEED Rushing waters of natural pool cascade onto my head. Better half's off to grab camera — shot he’ll take when I’m dead. The ocean’s deed to push me under amuse the man I’ve wed. 7/25/2020 7/25/2020 Modern Sijo Total of 45 syllables

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Date: 7/28/2020 12:50:00 PM
This one is so witty Kim. I've experienced this once so now I maintain my distance. Congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2020 6:19:00 PM
LOL! I’ve had two encounters! Thank you!
Date: 7/28/2020 5:09:00 AM
I have to tell you this one caused me anxiety; I have nearly drowned and it is an unpleasant feeling.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2020 6:19:00 PM
Yikes! Hugs.
Date: 7/26/2020 12:01:00 AM
I never go too deep into the sea, but I agree with you although great fun, never turn your back on it. Lovely poem Kim. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2020 3:52:00 AM
This really happened...lol. I watched a father and his daughter under the cascade of water. So I decided to go under and indeed I did as it pushed me under. My sunglasses which were on the top of my head, were pushed onto my face such that my nose was bruised. Crazy!
Date: 7/25/2020 4:48:00 PM
The ocean can play rough sometimes - sounds like a fun excursion, though!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2020 4:52:00 PM
Oh it was! As the saying goes - never turn your back on the ocean. Playful for sure.