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Half-Eleven 
Invented by Nina Parmenter, the form consists of four rhyming couplets and one final rhyming tercet (three-liner). There are two options for the final tercet.
Syllable counts and rhyme scheme are as follows:
...11 (A)  5* (a)...11 (B) 5* (b)...11 (C) 5* (c)...11 (D)...5* (d)
And then a closing tercet of EITHER:
11 (A) (Exact repeat of line 1)
5* (a)
5* (a)
OR:
5* (a)
5* (a)
11 (A) (Exact repeat of line 1)     

     

I hear the Ocean call from cascading waves, to sailors and knaves. I feel Her misty breath on a foggy night when the air turns white. I smell Her salty spray saturating me; the fragrance of free. I taste the bitter-sweet essence of Her kiss; the promise of bliss. She calls Kings and slaves to watery graves; I hear the Ocean call from cascading waves.

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Date: 9/16/2023 4:52:00 AM
Good poem, Emile. Captures the mood and wraps it up wonderfully at the end. Best, John
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/16/2023 6:23:00 AM
Thanks, John; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/16/2023 4:09:00 AM
This is an excellent poem, and entry to the contest Emile; GL
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:23:00 AM
Thanks, Terry; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2023 2:39:00 PM
Emile, your poem appeals to all the senses, I wish Nina was around she was such a wonderful poet. good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan
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Date: 9/15/2023 3:08:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Yes, Nina's presence is missed, but her poetry and contributions to poetry live on my friend; Emile.

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