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The Obligation

Wedding band binding
Constricting Obligating
Love bands holds uplifts

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Mitch White

March 25, 2010 at 4:05 AM

How true these word are Congrats Sara

Ernilando Tugaff

March 17, 2010 at 9:26 AM

A lot of veracity in this well-crafted Senryu. I enjoyed the read. Ernilando

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 16, 2010 at 4:47 AM

Congratulations on your win Sara in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

March 14, 2010 at 9:41 AM

Congratulations to your win, Sara! "Love bands holds uplifts"- nice words! And thank you for your comments....Gert

Brian Strand

March 14, 2010 at 12:29 AM

Congrats on your contest success Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and kind words

Noel Villarosa

March 13, 2010 at 10:18 PM

Tie the knot, to the one we really love. So much inspiration on this Senryu. Congratulations on your win, Sara. (^_^) Noel.

Doris Culverhouse

March 13, 2010 at 6:45 PM

second place!! i knew it was a winner!!

Andrea Dietrich

March 13, 2010 at 6:07 PM

Way to go, Sara, congratulations with your big win. Andrea

John Freeman

March 13, 2010 at 5:28 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win Sara. Agape, Moses

Marty Owens

March 13, 2010 at 4:29 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Carrie Richards

March 13, 2010 at 3:47 PM

Congratulations, Sara...a wonderful and deserved win!! ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 13, 2010 at 3:10 PM

Congrats Sara on your 2nd place win in Raul's recent contest.. a wonderful Senryu and win for u to so enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie

Raul Moreno

March 13, 2010 at 2:53 PM

Sara, congratulations in placing second place in my contest...Raul

Colleen Bono

March 7, 2010 at 10:54 AM

very nice.my daughter is thinking about this.They grow to fast.Hope your day is good.

James Fraser

March 7, 2010 at 8:08 AM

They are placed with future intention, but through the years, their placing is mentioned. Excellent entry in Raul's contests Sara >> James

Lynette Chachere

March 6, 2010 at 1:16 AM

Beautiful words(: lets hope they always stay. -Always&Forever Lynette

Daniel Cheeseman

March 5, 2010 at 4:23 AM

A lot of truth in this piece, we all have wings and need to spread them at times Daniel

Andrea Dietrich

March 4, 2010 at 1:24 PM

Yes, they can constrict or uplift, it's all in the way it's perceived! Good luck in this nice contest Raul did! LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

March 4, 2010 at 12:28 PM

yep, its that way--to have and hold--your choking me--can't breath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 4, 2010 at 12:04 PM

Very nice ... a lovely way to look at the commitment between two in luv... enjoyed..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Richard Pickett

March 4, 2010 at 8:56 AM

I now pronounce you..... Very nice Sara....Taz

Carolyn Devonshire

March 4, 2010 at 7:33 AM

Very nice senryu, Sara. If this is for Raul's contest, I wish you much success. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

March 4, 2010 at 7:12 AM

Vows are made to keep! Well done, Sara! Good luck in Raul's contest! ~ Carrie

Daver Austin

March 4, 2010 at 6:49 AM

A fine reminder to all who wander. BIG LOVE, daver

Gert W. Knop

March 4, 2010 at 6:44 AM

I have to say in Melaneian Pidgin (spoken in Papua New Guinea): Dispela em i tru tumas!!! This is so true! Were there is love, it holds uplifts. Thank you Sara for you kind comments. Keep on writing! Gert

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