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The Obligation

Wedding band binding
Constricting Obligating
Love bands holds uplifts

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Mitch White

Date: 3/25/2010 4:05:00 AM

How true these word are Congrats Sara

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/17/2010 9:26:00 AM

A lot of veracity in this well-crafted Senryu. I enjoyed the read. Ernilando

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/16/2010 4:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sara in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/14/2010 9:41:00 AM

Congratulations to your win, Sara! "Love bands holds uplifts"- nice words! And thank you for your comments....Gert

Brian Strand

Date: 3/14/2010 12:29:00 AM

Congrats on your contest success Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and kind words

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/13/2010 10:18:00 PM

Tie the knot, to the one we really love. So much inspiration on this Senryu. Congratulations on your win, Sara. (^_^) Noel.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/13/2010 6:45:00 PM

second place!! i knew it was a winner!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2010 6:07:00 PM

Way to go, Sara, congratulations with your big win. Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 3/13/2010 5:28:00 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win Sara. Agape, Moses

Marty Owens

Date: 3/13/2010 4:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/13/2010 3:47:00 PM

Congratulations, Sara...a wonderful and deserved win!! ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/13/2010 3:10:00 PM

Congrats Sara on your 2nd place win in Raul's recent contest.. a wonderful Senryu and win for u to so enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/13/2010 2:53:00 PM

Sara, congratulations in placing second place in my contest...Raul

Colleen Bono

Date: 3/7/2010 10:54:00 AM

very nice.my daughter is thinking about this.They grow to fast.Hope your day is good.

James Fraser

Date: 3/7/2010 8:08:00 AM

They are placed with future intention, but through the years, their placing is mentioned. Excellent entry in Raul's contests Sara >> James

Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/6/2010 1:16:00 AM

Beautiful words(: lets hope they always stay. -Always&Forever Lynette

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 3/5/2010 4:23:00 AM

A lot of truth in this piece, we all have wings and need to spread them at times Daniel

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:24:00 PM

Yes, they can constrict or uplift, it's all in the way it's perceived! Good luck in this nice contest Raul did! LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/4/2010 12:28:00 PM

yep, its that way--to have and hold--your choking me--can't breath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2010 12:04:00 PM

Very nice ... a lovely way to look at the commitment between two in luv... enjoyed..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Richard Pickett

Date: 3/4/2010 8:56:00 AM

I now pronounce you..... Very nice Sara....Taz

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/4/2010 7:33:00 AM

Very nice senryu, Sara. If this is for Raul's contest, I wish you much success. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/4/2010 7:12:00 AM

Vows are made to keep! Well done, Sara! Good luck in Raul's contest! ~ Carrie

Daver Austin

Date: 3/4/2010 6:49:00 AM

A fine reminder to all who wander. BIG LOVE, daver

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/4/2010 6:44:00 AM

I have to say in Melaneian Pidgin (spoken in Papua New Guinea): Dispela em i tru tumas!!! This is so true! Were there is love, it holds uplifts. Thank you Sara for you kind comments. Keep on writing! Gert

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